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Old 25-12-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Smile ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

SSA dosto ik hor Rachna lae k ayan........umeed hae tuhanu pasand ayegi........j na v ayi tan v ur comments and suggetions alway welcome........


Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae jeehdae mud k aun di aas nae,
oh sade layi jindagi wargi chahae ohdae layi asin kuch khas nayi

oh gujar gaye kise waqt jihi jihne mud k wapis auna nae,
oh rus k gaye mehman jihi jinhe thadi te pair tikauna nae
har pal lagdi hae mere kol khadi sach eh hae k oh mere paas nahi

Asin odian...........................................

Ohdae bin keehne rusna sang mere, main v russan tan manave kaun mainu
buha khatka k odae bulekhe paye eh langdi vadadi paun mainu
sach oh hun rahe asadae nahi par kyun dil nu aunda vishwash nahì

Asin ohdian odikan............................................ ......

Oh hisab dee kachi oh kee samjae ohne kee paya kee khoya eh,
Te mere hisab wich koi din nae aisa jadon dil ohdae layi na roya e
Is ghaate dae saudae nae sanu dob dena auna hisab eh sanu raas nae

Asin ohdian............................................ ............

Mainu mildi jo c mere rab wargi rab ena meharban kithon,
Mera manmandir hun khali hae lab liavan ohda bhagwan kithon
muuhon mangian maut v mildi nae kyun hunda jism hun laash nae


Asin ohdian udeekan…………………………………… …………………….

 
Old 26-12-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

as always bahut sohna likheya aa ...tfs

 
Old 26-12-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

Thank u Simran

 
Old 26-12-2007
sunny240
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

wadyiea likhyea 22 ji..very gud...............

 
Old 26-12-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

Thx brother

 
Old 26-12-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

nice1..........

 
Old 26-12-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

Thanks Ranjit Veer

 
Old 28-12-2007
hoshiarpur
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

yaar bahut hi wadiya.......jiddan kise ne apna dil hi khol ke rakh ditta hove........

 
Old 28-12-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

Thanks veer

 
Old 29-12-2007
amani23
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

very sohna jii

 
Old 29-12-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

Thank uuuu Amni

 
Old 29-12-2007
amani23
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

Originally Posted by SHEREPUNJAB View Post
Thank uuuu Amni
oh ur welcome jiii per sachipadd kai dil garden garden hoya

 
Old 30-12-2007
V € € R
 
Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

bahot hi vadiyaa likheyaa 22 ji...........

 
Old 30-12-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Lightbulb Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

Originally Posted by amani23 View Post
oh ur welcome jiii per sachipadd kai dil garden garden hoya
Umeed hae aundae saal which vee tusi meri poetry edan hee pardae rahogae taki mainu apna aap sidharan da mauka mailda rahe

 
Old 30-12-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Talking Re: ***Asin ohdian udeekan nit kardae............

Originally Posted by veer View Post
bahot hi vadiyaa likheyaa 22 ji...........

Thanks a lot brother


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