Asi ki kar baithan han....

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Gabru_Gulab_Varga

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Asi ki kar baithan han:wub

Teri judai sadkan,
Eh dil udaas kar baithan han
Akhiyan diyan gava neendran,
Agg vichhore di jala baithan han
Teri yaad da,
Ik-ik phul sambhali baithan han
Udaasi de kujh lafjaan nu,
Is dil da malham bana baithan han:dr .

d.j.

:rose
 
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Gabru_Gulab_Varga

member
Thanx Sando!

Kaun??? Jinne munde karte pagal, hor kaun?

BTW: Feel free (ANYONE) to knock me back if you don't like my shayari's. I'll take it as +ve feedback.

:)
 
Niki_Grewal

Niki_Grewal

!*~PrInCe$$~*!
djatt said:
Oh, ho Nikki. Eh shayari tere layi tan mein likhi si>hug ! Keep it up, mein kidde naal karan? Aaja murhke:pr , I m missing you already :tear & look its only been a few mins since tu offline kargayi.

d.j.
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lolz....wait a min....m i gettin it rite or wht...lolz....eh poem da mere naal taan koi link hi nahi :nerd ...fer mere lai kidhan likhti..:nerd ...waise sohni hai.
 
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Gabru_Gulab_Varga

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Nikki ji,

The poems about someone missing :(( someone, hor bohat ziyada mushy wushy cheez tan nahi likhi jede karke tera samband na ho sake...vaise vi, kal parsoon mein likhiya si ke shayari tanhi likhoo je tu vi kujh likhoongi...yeah, kujh yaad aaya?:thinking :thinking So tuhanu nahi miss karna, te hor kenu???
NEways, I'm glad that you liked it though :yr ....phew\:d/ !
 
Niki_Grewal

Niki_Grewal

!*~PrInCe$$~*!
kalnu likhuingi kuchh je dil kita,,.ajj taan maran da vi time nahi lolz...i better log out....n i seriously cant recall u ....i need to go to LC to check it...lolz
 
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Gabru_Gulab_Varga

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JUGNOO said:
vadia likheya....:wah

aap likeya dj k chori da maal.....?lol
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Chori?...oh vi mein>du , Jugnoo? Chali na hove:um ! Je jattan ne chori karni si, tan do-tin shayari diyan lina kyun chori karniyan si? Tu bach ke rahi mein dasan. Jad asi chori kiti tere pairan te bhaar nahi aouna. Here’s one for you:

Ik hi nazar ‘ch tusi sade mehmaan ban gaye,
Do gallan ki kitiyan saara jahaan ban gaye,
Kol reh ke vi lok sade ban na sake,
Tusi door reh ke vi sadi jaan ban gaye.

Here’s a tip: “ni tu huni huni hoyi mutiyaar, munidyan tu bachke rahi!” – Labh Janjua/PMC>haha >haha >haha

d.j.
 
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Gabru_Gulab_Varga

member
Bohat, bohat shukriya SP sahib! Par, curiousity kis cheez di hai?:kin


pink puma said:
so beautiful :dr i think you should publish a poetry book :nerd
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Thanks for the compliments pink p :joy ! I appreciate it!

Vaise book tan tu vi likh rahi han, ke nahi? Idea marra nahi yaar. Chal fir appaan kethe book likh de han!

dj

:kik
 
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JUGNOO

Member
djatt said:
Chori?...oh vi mein>du , Jugnoo? Chali na hove:um ! Je jattan ne chori karni si, tan do-tin shayari diyan lina kyun chori karniyan si? Tu bach ke rahi mein dasan. Jad asi chori kiti tere pairan te bhaar nahi aouna. Here’s one for you:

Ik hi nazar ‘ch tusi sade mehmaan ban gaye,
Do gallan ki kitiyan saara jahaan ban gaye,
Kol reh ke vi lok sade ban na sake,
Tusi door reh ke vi sadi jaan ban gaye.

Here’s a tip: “ni tu huni huni hoyi mutiyaar, munidyan tu bachke rahi!” – Labh Janjua/PMC>haha >haha >haha


d.j.
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:O:O:O
:omg
:wah for ur poem...
n :thnx...bot vadia likheya..
n :t..for ur tip
 
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Gabru_Gulab_Varga

member
Poem kiddhe vaste likhi hai, eh tenu aoun vale kujh dinna tak patta lag jao. Ohdi photo mein naal joruga apni next shayari naal. Photo tan tiyaar hai, par shayari kujh dhilli chaldi ha...stay tuned dude! :)

dj
 
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