Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN
GAJAB HAI APNE ISHQ TE, MEIN AITWAR KAR BAITHI,
MEIN APNA AAP QATIL APNE TE, WAAR KAR BAITHI,
TASALI C JAWANI NU, KI MERA RAB NAHI KOYEE,
GUNAAH KAR KE KHUDA DE SAHMNE, INKAR KAR BAITHI,

JARA DOZAKH CHON JAANDE JAANDE MEINU, MIL TE JAAWAN DE,
GUNEH GAARAN DI DUNIYA NAAL, MEIN PYAR KAR BAITHI,
NAABHI PAGG DE THALE, MEIN TERI SURAT HI TA DEKHI -C,
GUNAH HOYA KI MAITHON, JO TERA DEEDAR KAR BAITHI,

MERE AMLAAN DI FATTI TE, LIKH DE IKK HOR GUNAH MERA,
JO PEE KE AMRIT MOHABBAT DA, TERE NAAL IKRAAR KAR BAITHI,
TERI ZANNAT CH SUNIYA-E, KI MILNIYAN HOORAN, HAR BANDE NU,
SAZAA DEWE GA KI, JO APNI NAZAR DA TERE TE WAAR KAR BAITHI,

BAKASH DEWE TE GHATNAA NAHI-E, KUSH TERI REHMAT DA,
BHAROSE TERI REHMAT DE,
APNINDER
GUNAH DO TAU CHAR KAR BAITHI,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 

smilly

VIP
bhut bhut bhut bhut vadiyaa .........

Chahe suraj di roshni muke....
Chahe nadiyaan vich pani suke....
Eh dua hai jass di thuvade li ......

Ki Thuvaadi shayri di Khubsurti kade na muke.....


Keep it up..... i read ur all shayri. I don't have words .... bhut vadiyaa ne .......
 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN
bhut bhut bhut bhut vadiyaa .........

Chahe suraj di roshni muke....
Chahe nadiyaan vich pani suke....
Eh dua hai jass di thuvade li ......
Ki Thuvaadi shayri di Khubsurti kade na muke.....


Keep it up..... i read ur all shayri. I don't have words .... bhut vadiyaa ne .......
ssa dear,, thnxx 4 the compliments,, but ih v bohut sohna likhiya tusi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 

Niki_Grewal

!*~PrInCe$$~*!
GAJAB HAI APNE ISHQ TE, MEIN AITWAR KAR BAITHI,
MEIN APNA AAP QATIL APNE TE, WAAR KAR BAITHI,
bahot sohna likhya....u used words very beautifuly......per ikk suggestion devan...i hope u wont mind....apna di jagah apni likhdo...te qatil ton baad coma laga do......u r too good at it....n i m kinda not very comfortable suggesting it....plz dont think tht i m correcting u or sumthing....keep the gr8 work up..i jus loved it :)

MEIN APNI AAP QATIL , APNE TE WAAR KAR BAITHI,
 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN
thnx niki dear,, i'm very happy u like it, per shiry de ih sentances right aa,,:hug :wub

APNA AAP means MYSELF
there's no such word as APNI AAP, for meaning of MYSELF in shiry,


MEIN APNA AAP QATIL APNE TE,, means,,,, i secrificed myself on my own qaatil,,

if you put a coma after QAATIL,, you would cut out a APNE AAP= ON MY

THUS LEAVING YOU SHIRY SENTENCE IN TRANSLATION= I SECRIFICED MYSELF QATIL ,,,,,,,,,,this sentance would not make sence,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,because u separated apne aap= on my,,,,



 
Very nice Apnindeer ji,You have realy a great tendency to write ths great yiri,I like ur all posts,

Kyun payia preeta sade naal je dhoke hi tu dene si,
Je hase nahi sanu de sakiya taan hanju vi nahi dene si,
Aven aalar jawani tere piche roll ti,
Har dil wali gall tere aage khol ti,
Ki pata si tere challe mundhia ane mahange pene si,
Je hase nahi sanu................................


:kuto :baby :kuto
 
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