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Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

GAJAB HAI APNE ISHQ TE, MEIN AITWAR KAR BAITHI, MEIN APNA AAP QATIL APNE TE, WAAR KAR BAITHI, TASALI C JAWANI NU, KI MERA RAB NAHI KOYEE, GUNAAH KAR KE .....


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Old 04-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

GAJAB HAI APNE ISHQ TE, MEIN AITWAR KAR BAITHI,
MEIN APNA AAP QATIL APNE TE, WAAR KAR BAITHI,
TASALI C JAWANI NU, KI MERA RAB NAHI KOYEE,
GUNAAH KAR KE KHUDA DE SAHMNE, INKAR KAR BAITHI,

JARA DOZAKH CHON JAANDE JAANDE MEINU, MIL TE JAAWAN DE,
GUNEH GAARAN DI DUNIYA NAAL, MEIN PYAR KAR BAITHI,
NAABHI PAGG DE THALE, MEIN TERI SURAT HI TA DEKHI -C,
GUNAH HOYA KI MAITHON, JO TERA DEEDAR KAR BAITHI,

MERE AMLAAN DI FATTI TE, LIKH DE IKK HOR GUNAH MERA,
JO PEE KE AMRIT MOHABBAT DA, TERE NAAL IKRAAR KAR BAITHI,
TERI ZANNAT CH SUNIYA-E, KI MILNIYAN HOORAN, HAR BANDE NU,
SAZAA DEWE GA KI, JO APNI NAZAR DA TERE TE WAAR KAR BAITHI,

BAKASH DEWE TE GHATNAA NAHI-E, KUSH TERI REHMAT DA,
BHAROSE TERI REHMAT DE,
APNINDER
GUNAH DO TAU CHAR KAR BAITHI,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 04-05-2007
Gabru_Gulab_Varga
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

another nice piece ji.................... :D :D :D

 
Old 04-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

Originally Posted by DangerouslyJatt View Post
another nice piece ji.................... :D :D :D
thnxxxxxx mehar veer ji,, ki haal aa ajj tuhada,,,wish me luck,, sitting an exam today,,

 
Old 04-05-2007
THE GODFATHER
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

bahut hi sohna likheya hai ji....

 
Old 04-05-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

kya baat hai kuriye aundiya hee shuru hogi keep it up,,,

 
Old 04-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

Originally Posted by THE GODFATHER View Post
bahut hi sohna likheya hai ji....
godfather ji bohut meharbani,, passand karan di

 
Old 04-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

Originally Posted by Ronny View Post
kya baat hai kuriye aundiya hee shuru hogi keep it up,,,
thnx ji,,, ki kariye,, hor koyee kam hi nahi onda

 
Old 01-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

ana :jiggy :jiggy
anaanaanaana

 
Old 01-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

bhut bhut bhut bhut vadiyaa .........

Chahe suraj di roshni muke....
Chahe nadiyaan vich pani suke....
Eh dua hai jass di thuvade li ......

Ki Thuvaadi shayri di Khubsurti kade na muke.....


Keep it up..... i read ur all shayri. I don't have words .... bhut vadiyaa ne .......

 
Old 01-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

Originally Posted by smilly View Post
bhut bhut bhut bhut vadiyaa .........

Chahe suraj di roshni muke....
Chahe nadiyaan vich pani suke....
Eh dua hai jass di thuvade li ......
Ki Thuvaadi shayri di Khubsurti kade na muke.....


Keep it up..... i read ur all shayri. I don't have words .... bhut vadiyaa ne .......
ssa dear,, thnxx 4 the compliments,, but ih v bohut sohna likhiya tusi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 02-06-2007
•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤°
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

bot bot botttt sohna...thx reshmi..

 
Old 02-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

thnxx simran sis ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 02-06-2007
❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

wooooowwww bohat vadiaaaa sistaaaa.....

 
Old 02-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: Apninder Gunah Do Tau Char Kar Baithi

thnx dearest,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 05-06-2007
Niki_Grewal
 
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Originally Posted by reshmi_mutiyar View Post
GAJAB HAI APNE ISHQ TE, MEIN AITWAR KAR BAITHI,
MEIN APNA AAP QATIL APNE TE, WAAR KAR BAITHI,
bahot sohna likhya....u used words very beautifuly......per ikk suggestion devan...i hope u wont mind....apna di jagah apni likhdo...te qatil ton baad coma laga do......u r too good at it....n i m kinda not very comfortable suggesting it....plz dont think tht i m correcting u or sumthing....keep the gr8 work up..i jus loved it

MEIN APNI AAP QATIL , APNE TE WAAR KAR BAITHI,


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