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***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

oh chali gayi kehke alvida meri jaan........ kade asi usde chehre vall dekhde han kade usde jhoolde hathan nu dekhde han...... jihna te rehnda si hamesha sada naam, ohna bullan .....


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Old 25-09-2006
Talli_ji
 
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oh chali gayi kehke alvida meri jaan........
kade asi usde chehre vall dekhde han
kade usde jhoolde hathan nu dekhde han......
jihna te rehnda si hamesha sada naam,
ohna bullan nu hassdeyan nu dekhde han....
kade ikk pal di judayi nahi si sehnde,
ajj satho door hon di khushi dekhde han.......
kade gale ch jerra baahan de haar pa dinde si,
ajj galon lehnde asi ohna haaran nu dekhde han........
kade jerre lainde si saah sade saahan ch,
ajj ohna valoo sade kolo mange saah dekhde han......
apneyan nu chadd ke banaye si jo pyare,
ajj kar gaye jerre beganeya nu dekhde han......
jihna nu farrayi si dor asi zindagi di,
ajj ohna hatho katti oh dor nu dekhde han.........
jihna nal hon te zindagi lagdi si sohni,
ajj sadi zindagi virrani hundi ohde kolo dekhde han.......
kita si jihna vaada sang jeen te maran da,
ajj RICKY os maut nu apne val aunde asi dekhde han..........

 
Old 26-09-2006
mast malang
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

oye kidda ricky 22..
bahot vadiya likhiya yaar..
mainu pehchaniya..?

 
Old 26-09-2006
Talli_ji
 
Thumbs up Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

han 22 thik han, thx yaar.......menu lagda mai pachan leya......tu punjabigoon(deepa) ta nahi pz vala........

Originally Posted by mast malang View Post
oye kidda ricky 22..
bahot vadiya likhiya yaar..
mainu pehchaniya..?

 
Old 27-09-2006
mast malang
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

Originally Posted by Talli_ji View Post
han 22 thik han, thx yaar.......menu lagda mai pachan leya......tu punjabigoon(deepa) ta nahi pz vala........

chal 22 theek hi chahida sab kuch..han main ohi aa pz wala..
main kiha ithe v dekh layie ki chalda....lol

 
Old 27-09-2006
Talli_ji
 
Thumbs up Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

han fer ta mai sahi pehchanya, hor kida deepe 22, sab thik thak, chale eteh ao ya othe gal ta ikko hai, mittra ne ta nal hi rehna.............heheh
Originally Posted by mast malang View Post
chal 22 theek hi chahida sab kuch..han main ohi aa pz wala..
main kiha ithe v dekh layie ki chalda....lol

 
Old 27-09-2006
Talli_ji
 
Thumbs up Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

han fer ta mai sahi pehchanya, hor kida deepe 22, sab thik thak, chale eteh ao ya othe gal ta ikko hai, mittra ne ta nal hi rehna.............heheh
Originally Posted by mast malang View Post
chal 22 theek hi chahida sab kuch..han main ohi aa pz wala..
main kiha ithe v dekh layie ki chalda....lol

 
Old 27-09-2006
Talli_ji
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

hanji, menu ikk gal zaror pata lag gayi ethe, ke es site te ah poetry nu koi nahi parrda, fer es column ( poetry, shayari, intezar) nu banan da ki fayda.............sirf mere hi nahi , horan de vi likhe shayer nu koi nahi parrda, kise kol tym nahi............so appa ta ajjto , than leya ke ethe koi shayer nahi likhna , bakki gappan jiniyan marzi maralo...........rabb rakha jii..........

 
Old 27-09-2006
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

je thude verge hor members aa gaye oh par lain gaye
per kayie purane thread dekho
saare apprciate karde

 
Old 28-09-2006
mast malang
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

hanji isnu asi hi parriya karna...
bas dekhde jayo..heheheh

 
Old 28-09-2006
mast malang
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

Originally Posted by Talli_ji View Post
han fer ta mai sahi pehchanya, hor kida deepe 22, sab thik thak, chale eteh ao ya othe gal ta ikko hai, mittra ne ta nal hi rehna.............heheh

han 22 sahi pehchaniya tu..bas 22 apan theek thaak aa .
apni suna..? aho kite marzi hoyia apan tan gaah hi pauna... heheheh

 
Old 30-09-2006
shaunkan_punjaban
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

Originally Posted by Talli_ji View Post
hanji, menu ikk gal zaror pata lag gayi ethe, ke es site te ah poetry nu koi nahi parrda, fer es column ( poetry, shayari, intezar) nu banan da ki fayda.............sirf mere hi nahi , horan de vi likhe shayer nu koi nahi parrda, kise kol tym nahi............so appa ta ajjto , than leya ke ethe koi shayer nahi likhna , bakki gappan jiniyan marzi maralo...........rabb rakha jii..........
mere vaste likh deya karo 22 ji
vaise eh vala v sohna sigga ...pz vale v sohne hunde saare

 
Old 30-09-2006
mast malang
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

ssa punjaban ji...ki haal chaal aa ..
tusi v pz wale ho..main ni pehchaniya tuhanu..

 
Old 30-09-2006
shaunkan_punjaban
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

haww pehchaneya nai? barri maari gal hai par mein tuhanu pehchaan leya
tusi ho shayed deepa id punjabigoon .... galat pehchaneya hove te das deina ji
te meri id pz vali hai fer kidha nai pta lagga tuhanu

 
Old 01-10-2006
mast malang
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

Originally Posted by shaunkan_punjaban View Post
haww pehchaneya nai? barri maari gal hai par mein tuhanu pehchaan leya
tusi ho shayed deepa id punjabigoon .... galat pehchaneya hove te das deina ji
te meri id pz vali hai fer kidha nai pta lagga tuhanu
oh sorry ji...mainu pehlan lagda tan c v tusi ohi shaunkan ji ho..
fer main sochiya shayed koi hor hove...chalo ji hun pta lagg giya..
hor sunao ki haal aa....hanji tusi theek pehchaniya mainu..no doubt

 
Old 02-10-2006
THE GODFATHER
 
Re: ***apne val aundi os maut nu dekhda han***

ho gayi jaan pehchaan....
hun kuch gaur sheyar te vi kariye...
bayi vadhiya hai....
for sharing.....


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