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Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

Akh da maar ke oh teer gai kalja asada te oh cheer gai oochi lami koonj vargi mutiyar athri jatti yaaro oh heer jahi ki tahreef karan ohdey lab o .....


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Old 05-09-2007
jimmi
 
Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

Akh da maar ke oh teer gai
kalja asada te oh cheer gai
oochi lami koonj vargi mutiyar
athri jatti yaaro oh heer jahi
ki tahreef karan ohdey lab o rukhsar di
bull gulab di patiyan galan ich rangat annar di
sajno asano te kar oh dilgeer gai
phull khildey jadoon vi oh hasse
bado badi sada dil pai oh khasse
dharti maan apne te kare
pabban bhar oh jadon vi ture
tak tak usno dil nahein rajda
ji kare rahway usno takda
akh chuk ke jiss wal tak laway
samjho badal usdi taqdeer gai.
khawan te khiyalan ich oh rehndi ey
yaaro ik sohni mutiyar tasweer jahi
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Old 06-09-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: Akh da maar ke oh teer gai


 
Old 06-09-2007
jimmi
 
Re: Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

Originally Posted by Konvicted_Jatt View Post
thnk ou bha

 
Old 07-09-2007
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

wow nice one aa g

 
Old 08-09-2007
jimmi
 
Re: Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

Originally Posted by Pardesan Punjaban View Post
wow nice one aa g
bahut bahut dhaneyaad ji . thnx a lot

 
Old 08-09-2007
jas_jøgåñ
 
Re: Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

kya baaaaaaaaaaaaaat hai, bahut sohna likheya g....

 
Old 08-09-2007
jimmi
 
Re: Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

Originally Posted by jas_jøgåñ View Post
kya baaaaaaaaaaaaaat hai, bahut sohna likheya g....
bahut bahu dhanevaad ji

 
Old 08-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

Bhut Sohna likhaya dear...

Keep it up.....

 
Old 09-09-2007
jimmi
 
Re: Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

Originally Posted by smilly View Post
Bhut Sohna likhaya dear...

Keep it up.....
thank you very much

 
Old 16-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: Akh da maar ke oh teer gai

nice.


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