A feelin for my love Nav

beautiful

beautiful

my SEXY love!!!!
A feeling so deep,a feeling so pure
A feeling of comfort,feeling secure
Feeling special,a feeling of goodness
A feeling of care,a feeling of trueness
So close so near so much love we share
A feeling of emptiness if you weren't here
Do not ever want to let this feeling i feel go
Let this be something i'll forever know
What would i feel without you
Like i'm in a dark place all lonely
In a cold cold room, with no one to hold me
But while i'm with you
I feel like i'm in paradise
Your everything i want
I never want to leave this place
I'm not goin even front
You make me feel good with all that you do
I feel LOVED when i'm with you...

:kik



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~dejavu~

~dejavu~

b@ck in bu$ine$$
very sweet, guess its dedicated to someone lucky..hey who is loved like that gota count himself lucky :) good luck both of ya...and beautiful dont let your creative germs die, keep @ it :)
 
arpita

arpita

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it's cute but could be developed more....i like the concept and i like the feeling...

"I'm not goin even front"
didnt understand the meaning of this line

keep writing :D
 
beautiful

beautiful

my SEXY love!!!!
"I'm not goin even front"
didnt understand the meaning of this line

keep writing :D[/quote]

thanx i really appreciate ur reply.

this line means tht he makes my life still . i m happy wut he gave me i dont need anymore life to c any other happiness.

i ll improve next time.
 
Ravan

Ravan

*****AKA-JATT*****
koi security guard hay ja koi Joker. just kidding....

written well hope i'll use it some day
 
beautiful

beautiful

my SEXY love!!!!
~dejavu~ said:
very sweet, guess its dedicated to someone lucky..hey who is loved like that gota count himself lucky :) good luck both of ya...and beautiful dont let your creative germs die, keep @ it :)
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thanx for likin my poem and for wishin us.

and abt my creative germs honestly i m not writer and i dont want to be .i think i got infections which produce this germs but now i cure it.
 
deadline

deadline

..kiti tere nal ki mari..
.....beautiful....poem by beautiful.....dis feelin u get....iz it coz of sumone special....if it is....dey must really special.........
 
Preeto

Preeto

~Parnaam Shaheeda Nu~
WOw bohat vadyia likhyia sis ji..................He's very lucky to get ur love...Babaji thuanu dona nu hamesha kathe rakhan te hamesha khush ryio dono jane...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My wishes are always with you 2
 
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