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harry22g_s

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lol.....thik ni likhi hoi,,,,sehriyaa bihariyaa ulaat ne,,hor tan koi gal nahi,,,jame pale punjab ch aa je punjabi na aye bari saram wali gal aa
 

xcelent

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khoobsurat likhya hove ta ,es da matlabh ehe nahi ke likhayi sohnni aa ya fer us vich koi galti na hove,, shayeri ch khoobsurat likhann da matlabh ke agar likhann wale ne 10 lines likhian ohna cho ik v dil nu chhoo jave ta badi khoobsurti naal baki dian 9 lines v achamba dikhaal dendian ne.

agar kisse nu samj na aayi hove meri pinglish ta maafi da haqdaar samjhde hoye maaf kar dena
 
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