new hope

In 2014 I had some up and downs,
Traveled big cities and small towns.
Seen small hearted people wearing luxury gowns.
Made some friends by acting like clowns.
Now taking good ahead living worse behind.
Hoping for a new year which requires no rewind.
God has blessed my with a angel one of his kind.
With this happiness going out of my mind.
Trying to be refreshed and be something new.
Enjoying it a lot although reasons are very few.
Sitting back in farms and playing with dew.
Just watching dark sky getting blue.

Writer:- Ankur Prashar


Happy New Year 2015 in advance may god bless everyone with best you deserve.

cool gudone

nice ankur

t......

Hey ankur it's really nice.
But if you don't mind I would suggest u to try these 3 words corrections in this poem its gonna be great. Just exchange
1. Luxury with luxurious
2. Living with leaving
3. Blessed my with blessed me.
Try it.
Hopefully u won't take my suggestions in a wrong way.

tfs....

In 2014 I had some up and downs,
Traveled big cities and small towns.
Seen small hearted people wearing luxurious gowns.
Made some friends by acting like clowns.
Now taking good ahead leaving worse behind.
Hoping for a new year which requires no rewind.
God has blessed me with a angel one of his kind.
With this happiness going out of my mind.
Trying to be refreshed and be something new.
Enjoying it a lot although reasons are very few.
Sitting back in farms and playing with dew.
Just watching dark sky getting blue.

Writer:- Ankur Prashar