Yakeen

[simran88]

Jinha manzilan nu paun da khawab c,
Aj oh manzil mil gai yakeen nai hunda,
Jehri duniya vasaun da khawab c,
Aj oh alag jahan vasan laga yakeen nahi hunda,
Jehri rahan te socheya c kade turange,
Aj oh rahwan te chaldeyan yakeen nahi hunda,
Jehri khushian nu paun da kade khawab c,
Aj jadon akhan oh khushi darshaundiyan yakeen nahi hunda,
Kade kise nu chaun da khawab c,
Aj jadon sanu koi chahve yakeen nai hunda....

Yakeen siga ohna aukhiyan te jihna cho asi lange,
yakeen siga ohna changiyan te jihna ne aukhe rahnwa cho kadayia,
Yakeen siga ohna akhan te jinha de athroo mashoor c,
Yakeen siga ohna akan te jehde har khushi ton marhoom c,
Yakeen siga ohna chanva te jinha ne todhe kai yakeen c,
Yakeen siga ohna sahnwa te jinha ch vasya na koi yakeen c.....

Par fer yakeen os Rab te hoya,
Fer os ek kol apna ap khoya,
Ohdi bandagi vich sab mashkin hoya,
Bas fer sab te yakeen hoya.....

 

[Black Cat]

too nice g....

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

really nice

but plz go through poetry rules once
https://www.unp.me/f30/rules-poetry-section-106023/

 

[VIP_FAKEER]

very nice Thank for you sharing

 

[JANT SINGH]

khoob.......

 

[#m@nn#]

bahut sohna.......

 

[simran88]

thanx everyone.......yup i hav went thru d rules now....remembr dem

 

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bahut khoob g