Tutte Dilan Di Duniya-3

[kanjjar]

O mill jande ne kahani banke
Dil ch vass jande ne nishani banke
Jeenu rakhde haan asin akkhan vich
Nikkal jande ne O paani banke
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Pyar diyan souhan te kade aitbaar na kareyo
Pyar ho vi jave tan kade ikraar na kareyo
Dillan de rishtey hamesha dard hi dinde ne
Meri manno tan yaaro kade pyar na kareyo.
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Galti sadi si jo tufaan nu asin kinara samjea
Thokebaaz lokan nu asin aapna sahara samjea
Jina nu bachaun layi asin bedi cho uttre
Sanu dubde nu unha ne 'ik nazara' samjea

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

nice veer .....
saddi jaan gyi, wich ohdiya khedan..

 

[nawanshahria]

kaim ah 22

 

[luv_beyond_limitz]

O mill jande ne kahani banke

Pyar diyan souhan te kade aitbaar na kareyo
Pyar ho vi jave tan kade ikraar na kareyo
Dillan de rishtey hamesha dard hi dinde ne
Meri manno tan yaaro kade pyar na kareyo.
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Galti sadi si jo tufaan nu asin kinara samjea
Thokebaaz lokan nu asin aapna sahara samjea
Jina nu bachaun layi asin bedi cho uttre
Sanu dubde nu unha ne 'ik nazara' samjea

gud veer , kalla kalla word sach aa , its awsome, koi word ni ehdi tareef lai,, keep posting veer, bahut pyara likhya, sach much word enough ni kidda tareef kara ehna lines di, Thanks

 

[kanjjar]

thanks alot lov_beyond and everyone else. i don't know which one of these 3 you liked but i added some more lines to the 2nd one. i hope y'all like it as well
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Dilan de soudeya ch sada ghaate hi hunde ne
Roop diyan raniya naa kade veopaar na kareyo
danny ajj tak rounda hai ohdi yaad vich
Mere jhuthe haase da awen aitbaar na kareyo
Dilan de rishtey hamesha dard hi dinde ne
Meri manno tan yaaro kade pyar na kareyo

 

[$hokeen J@tt]

awsome yaar........ kya baat aa dany veer... bahut vadiya si.... duja wla khaskar..... te jo hor lines jud gyaia us wich te fir kya kehne.......... keep it up bro...