keemat

[miteshinder]

Unjh hi rakhde rahe bachpan ton dil saaf asin...
.
....pta nai c k keemat tan chehreyaan di paindi hai dil di nai.... .. .

 

[$hokeen J@tt]

Superb nd so true lines

 

[Gagan minhas]

nice 1

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

good one..
please go through poetry rules once
https://www.unp.me/f30/rules-poetry-section-106023/

 

[miteshinder]

22 ji eh taan aap biti likhi hai

 

[$hokeen J@tt]

22g then mention ur name at the end

 

[#m@nn#]

Mitesh bai r u sure these lines are written by u...???

 

[miteshinder]

not written by me 22 ji the writer is unknown
i mean to say that eh mere te beet rahi hai