Just 2 lines..touching!

Queensaj · Jul 10, 2008

Dil dard ke samander mein doob gaya,
magar in aankhon se roya na gaya..
Tha itna pyaar ess dil mein..
ke uske bagair kabar me bhi soya na gaya.

MAVERICK · Jul 10, 2008

made 4 ..

this can have funny conotation too..

Queensaj · Jul 10, 2008

made for... ask the person who made it

funny? care to explain

MAVERICK · Jul 10, 2008

i meant..i made 4 lines..of the 2 u posted..

"ke uske bagair kabar me bhi soya na gaya."

use ur imagination on this one, i might sound kiddish or out of sync while explaining..

Queensaj · Jul 11, 2008

lol, thanks for turning around the mood of this thread.. i was trying to be slightly in touch with my emotions..

MAVERICK · Jul 11, 2008

laughing is a kind of emotion too... :an

Queensaj · Jul 11, 2008

i knew that was coming, lol. im in touch with those emotions all the time..

jaggi633725 · Feb 12, 2009

nice.