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• Feb 7, 2011

• #1

I love your smile, your face, and your eyes​

Damn, I'm good at telling lies!​

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I see your face when I am dreaming.​

That's why I always wake up screaming.​

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Oh loving beauty, you float with grace​

If only you could hide your face.​

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Kind, intelligent, loving and hot​

This describes everything you are not.​

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I want to feel your sweet embrace​

But don't take that paper bag off of your face.​

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My love, you take my breath away.​

What have you stepped in to smell this way?​

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My feelings for you no words can tell​

Except for maybe "Go To Hell".​

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Roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and
so are you.​

But the roses are wilting, the violets are dead, the
sugar bowl's empty and​

so is your head​

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What inspired this amorous rhyme?​

Two parts vodka, one part lime.​

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userid50966

Well-known member

• Feb 7, 2011

• #2

haje klh hi paddea phone msg ch , topic c ke in poetry competition it is said that right first line very romantic and 2nd line very very unromantic smthing like tht likhea cc

 

MAVERICK

Member

• Feb 7, 2011

• #3

^ main 4 ku sal pehlan parheya c

and samjh ni aundi..grej do part vodka nal hi enne set ho jande ne ke rhyme likh sakde ne...wow...

 

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• Feb 7, 2011

• #4

vodka da ki mel jol hega eh is thread ch

 

MAVERICK

Member

• Feb 7, 2011

• #5

^ read karo then chepo

What inspired this amorous rhyme?​

Two parts vodka, one part lime.​

 

harman03

:)

• Feb 7, 2011

• #6

Grewal janab

 

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• Feb 7, 2011

• #7

vodke vala skip dita c

 

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• Feb 18, 2011

• #8