yarr anmulle

Gagan minhas

Member

• Sep 24, 2011

• #1

Ik duje nu
Class vich jo ishare karde si, Juttiya
pain ton jama nadarde si, Period
koi hor hunda te book koi hor e
phad de si, Pichhe beh k so jande
ya gallan karde si, Aj kalle kalle ho
k Yaar hauke bharde ne, Koi thoda
koi jyada, miss ta sare e karde
ne..YAAR ANMULLE... .

 

Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• Sep 24, 2011

• #2

Old but gold..
Please go through poetry rules once..
https://www.unp.me/f30/rules-poetry-section-106023/

 

Gagan minhas

Member

• Sep 24, 2011

• #3

okkkk

 

~¤Akash¤~

Prime VIP

• Sep 24, 2011

• #4

bhut wadiyaa 22g

 

Gagan minhas

Member

• Sep 24, 2011

• #5

thanks veer g