vele lang jaande par yaadan

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Elite

• Jan 28, 2011

• #1

vele lang jaande par yaadan q piche reh jaandiyan???
ik haase nu yaad kar akhan q avein veh jaandiyan???
bas avein chit parchaun lyi,,kehlo dang jha tppaun lyi,,
chnge bhlya nu kmle bnaaun lyi,,,,,,,,,,
jubaana jhoothiyan gllan q avein keh jaandiyan????
...vele lang jaande par yaadan q piche reh jaandiyan???

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Saini Sa'aB

K00l$@!n!

• Jan 29, 2011

• #2

nice lines

 

Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• Jan 30, 2011

• #3

Please follow poetry rules,,, writer name in mandatory to mention