teri tasveer

Loveye

mauja maan di

• May 8, 2007

• #1

Teri tasveer to tera haal puchde haan
Kive bhull gaeo sada pyarr puchde haan
Kade akhde si tere bina nhiyo sarna
Ajj sar gya kive ae sawal puchde haan


Galat jagah te layi
galti sadi c
uto kiti laparwahi
galti sadi c
ohda ta koi saath nibhaun da wada nai c
dil nu jhuti aas jagai
galti sadi c

kade takde si do nain sanu chori chori
ajj oh nain hor ho gaye
pehla dil kita sada chori
hun oh sade chit chor ho gaye
sade bin jo kadi na lainde si saah
ajj ohna layi asi gair ho gaye
sadi ek hasi nal jina de jalde si chirag
uhna layi ajj asi benoor ho gaye
main pucheya kyo ayye sadi jindgi ch tusi
oh ek sorry keh k bilkul bekasoor ho gaye

==loveneet==​

 

•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤°

Elite

• May 8, 2007

• #2

very nice..
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reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• May 8, 2007

• #3

LoVeNeeT said:

Teri tasveer to tera haal puchde haan

Kive bhull gaeo sada pyarr puchde haan
Kade akhde si tere bina nhiyo sarna
Ajj sar gya kive ae sawal puchde haan​

Galat jagah te layi
galti sadi c
uto kiti laparwahi
galti sadi c
ohda ta koi saath nibhaun da wada nai c
dil nu jhuti aas jagai
galti sadi c​

kade takde si do nain sanu chori chori
ajj oh nain hor ho gaye
pehla dil kita sada chori
hun oh sade chit chor ho gaye
sade bin jo kadi na lainde si saah
ajj ohna layi asi gair ho gaye
sadi ek hasi nal jina de jalde si chirag
uhna layi ajj asi benoor ho gaye
main pucheya kyo ayye sadi jindgi ch tusi
oh ek sorry keh k bilkul bekasoor ho gaye​

==loveneet==​

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bohut sohna dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

Preeto

~Parnaam Shaheeda Nu~

• May 8, 2007

• #4

wow bohat vadyia likhyia sis............keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

J_Pannu

Member

• May 8, 2007

• #5

bohat sohna likhea sachhi very nice

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Dec 10, 2007

• #6

Kyaa baat hai ji bahoot hi vadiya likheya hai ji

 

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pawangrewal8

sohni_jatti

• Dec 10, 2007

• #7

bahut hi wadhia likhea tusi.......................

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Dec 14, 2007

• #8

Reshmi rumaal jaise, hijjara de kandea na, tere picho channa leero leer ho gaye.
Jaan lagga de geyo c 1 tasveer mainu, dekh dekh ohnu tasveer ho gaye.

Sohnea yara rondi hoyee di 1 tasveer banai.
o jithe aasahk gaddi charde mainu os jagah te layi.

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Dec 21, 2007

• #9

wah loveneet...bahut wadiya likheya aa....tfs

 

Maxsteel

~*~AbStRusE~*~

• Dec 21, 2007

• #10

sahi hai,,,likh dena chahida jo dil ch ave,,bahut sahi lagda hai.2-3 vaar padeyo jo likheya hor v vadiya lagega.

Tension jayada na layo...ahh uncommon ho ke common ho gayiyan ne.

Eho jahiyan satta ajj kal loki aam khate hai.
fer sade varge yaar roz milke mehfil jamaude hai.

Jindagi sirf ethe nahi rukdi.

1000,crore di abadi ch ghato ghat 15-16 pyar ate hai
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sunny240

Elite

• Dec 21, 2007

• #11

nice one........thnx 4 sharing.........

 

Loveye

mauja maan di

• Jul 12, 2008

• #12

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jaggi633725

***********

• Feb 12, 2009

• #13

nice.