ruk gayi zindagi.....

smilly

VIP

• Nov 20, 2007

• #1

Pata ni kyon eh ruk gayi zindagi..
Khawayisha si lakha te muk gayi zindagi..

Badi tej si kade raftar es di..
Eh kehde raah te pai ke ruk gayi zindagi..

Jithe main ni si jhukeya..
Uthe Kyun eh jhuk gayi zindagi..

Bejan ji rooh ho gayi meri..
Te changi bhali chaldi-chaldi ruk gayi zindagi..

Do bundaan di si pyaas meri ..
Pher vi thalaan vang hi suk gayi zindagi..

Rabba Kehde janam da badla lita 'jas' ton ..
Jo changi bhali chaldi-chaldi ruk gayi zindagi..

 

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MAVERICK

Member

• Nov 20, 2007

• #2

Bahut vadhiya 22..

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 20, 2007

• #3

thanx dear .....

 

Lily

B.R

Staff member

• Nov 20, 2007

• #4

Bahut vadhiya..
Chaaaaaaaaak de fatte...

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 20, 2007

• #5

lily said:

Bahut vadhiya..
Chaaaaaaaaak de fatte...

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thanx dear.........

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 21, 2007

• #6

Kuj duri te si chaanan ..
Te eh hanere vich hi ruk gayi zindagi .....
Bada garur si apne te ki jit laanga har baazi is jag te..
Par haaran vich hi dosto meri muk gayi zindagi.....

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Nov 21, 2007

• #7

Bhaoot acche veer ji,

Bahoot hi sohna likhea hai, jiunde vasde ravo.

khushia mano

 

sunny240

Elite

• Nov 21, 2007

• #8

ssa jass veer,,,,,,,

bhaut hi sona likhyea hai tusi..........

rabb thaunu sarryia khushyia deve......

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 21, 2007

• #9

grewalsandy said:

Bhaoot acche veer ji,

Bahoot hi sohna likhea hai, jiunde vasde ravo.

khushia mano

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THANX DEAR SANDY...

Enna maan den layi te pyari ji wish layi.....

Tusi vi lakhaan khusiyaanmano dear

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 21, 2007

• #10

sunny240 said:

ssa jass veer,,,,,,,

bhaut hi sona likhyea hai tusi..........

rabb thaunu sarryia khushyia deve......

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thanx sunny dear....

tusi vi veer lakh khusiyaan mano te tarkiyaan karo......

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 21, 2007

• #11

Chupaya vi bathera ki bach sakaan is de kehar ton..
Par meri taan ban zehar gayi zindagi .....
Kade lagdi si meri apni ..
Jo ban begani aaj thehar gayi zindagi.......

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Nov 21, 2007

• #12

wadiya likhia...........................

 

V

V € € R

~Badmassha Vich Shareef~

• Nov 22, 2007

• #13

bahot hi vadiyaa likheyaa aa ji.........

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 22, 2007

• #14

veer said:

bahot hi vadiyaa likheyaa aa ji.........

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thanx dear........

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 22, 2007

• #15

Pardesan Punjaban said:

wadiya likhia...........................

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thanx pp dear ...

 

nonfictious

Nonfictious

• Nov 28, 2007

• #16

smilly said:

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Pata ni kyon eh ruk gayi zindagi..
Khawayisha si lakha te muk gayi zindagi..

Badi tej si kade raftar es di..
Eh kehde raah te pai ke ruk gayi zindagi..

Jithe main ni si jhukeya..
Uthe Kyun eh jhuk gayi zindagi..

Bejan ji rooh ho gayi meri..
Te changi bhali chaldi-chaldi ruk gayi zindagi..

Do bundaan di si pyaas meri ..
Pher vi thalaan vang hi suk gayi zindagi..

Rabba Kehde janam da badla lita 'jas' ton ..
Jo changi bhali chaldi-chaldi ruk gayi zindagi..

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bahot hi vadhiya bayi

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 28, 2007

• #17

nonfictious said:

bahot hi vadhiya bayi

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thanx dear.......

 

Konvicted_Jatt

S@RP@NCH

• Dec 3, 2007

• #18

nice poem dear.......

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Dec 3, 2007

• #19

hanji jass bhaji
bahut sohna likhya dear but zindagi muki nahi

 

smilly

VIP

• Dec 4, 2007

• #20

Ravivir said:

hanji jass bhaji
bahut sohna likhya dear but zindagi muki nahi

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thanx dear eh hi dukh hai ki zindagi muki ni pata ni hor ki ki vekhana reh gaya.... Rabb diyaan rabb jane.......