pyaar diyaan rahvaan

smilly

smilly

VIP
.......

Intzaar kita har ande jande rahvaan vich,
Pyar ni karida kade dujeya diya salaah vich,
Mangani si taan meri maut mangdi......
Tusi mangi vi judai pyaar diyaan rahvaan vich,

Aaj vi teri khusbo labda phirda haan......
Har andi jandi havaavan vich...........
Aake vekh lai tera hi naa chete rehda.....
Mere har ande jande saanhaan vich....

Duya mangda haan rub kolon ki ......
Jadon vi aave maut mainu ave teriyaan bhaavaan vich.....
Eh taqdir si saadi yaaroo.....
Sacha pyaar Laabde haan asi Kyun bewafaavan vich........

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smilly

smilly

VIP
nishan dhundhte hai

nishan dhundhte hai
Dard-e-dil ke siva kuch nahin baaki eh dost .........
Bas beete waqt ke nishan dhundhte hain ......

Gumnaam si hai zindagi yaaro ....
Kyun hum usey ujalon ke darmiyan dundhte hain...

Koi keh de mere dilbar se jake .....
Aaj bhi hum unke kadmon ke nishaan dhundte hain...

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smilly

smilly

VIP
Re: nishan dhundhte hai

thanx ..... APNINDER ji thuvade ton vadiyaan nahi likhde ...... Bhut pyar likhya si sherdil te preeto layi.......

Oh bade karma vale honde ne jinaa de dost kuch likh sakde ne unha layi...

keep it up........
 
smilly

smilly

VIP
Re: nishan dhundhte hai

Eh sacha hai mai shayar nahi haan par.APNINDER ji enaa janda haan ki jo padan ton dil nu chu jaaye ate dil naal likhi hove .... Oh hi shayar di asal shayri.. hai thuvadi shayri vich oh gal hai...

Jive mul dil ton likhi shayri da nahin pai sakda..... eh ek sach hai us da mul sirf us nu padke tarif karan valayaan naal hi lagdi.......

thuvadi shaayri majboor kardi hai tarif karan nu ......bhut vadiyaa likdhe ho ....

Asin taan sirf isq ate guman di hi gal likihde haan tusin taan har topic te likhde ho ur great...

god bless u... keep it up
 
reshmi_mutiyar

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN
Re: nishan dhundhte hai

smilly;
parmatma kare tusi sada hi khush raho,, aaini izzat dain wala,, bohut changa hunda aa, aur mere kol change dostaan di kammi aa, :hug
 
smilly

smilly

VIP
thanx APNINDER ji tusi changa dost samjahya .....

But dear eh sirf main nahin kehda kisi ton vi puchyo ... Tusi vadiyaa likde ho

Is duniya vich sachi te achaayi taan hun thodi hi reh gayiiii...

Kuj jhothey rishte rakhde ne,
kuj sach ton door Bhajde ne......
Jo sach de naal chalde ne ......
Oh sada suraj vangoo vaalde(chamkde) ne

jass (smilly)
 
reshmi_mutiyar

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN
smilly dear,, khush rehna chondi aa mein,, pichle 6 saalan to ghar ch dukh karke,, mein roya hi aa bass, hun ro ke thakk gayee aa,,, mein aani v changi nahi,,
pz te 1 sohne munde ne menu sabhna naal pyar karna sikhaya,,,,, per mein badle ch osse hi munde nu mere naal nafrat karni sikhayee,,,



mein piyar di bhukhi azzlaan to,
menu koyee khook sula dewe,
mere bhaan da oh v amrit-e,
mere zehar v mooh nu laa dewe,
ohde galh lag ke mein jee sakdi,
jehda galh wich bahaan paa dewe,
bina piyar to uthe thukke na apninder,
bhaaven lakh koyee swarg banaa dewe
 
smilly

smilly

VIP
Thanx... 4 sharin
Sukh dukh taan part of life ne....
Hoor jo dukhan vich sukh da raah talash lainda hai asal jindagi vich oh hi sacha insaan hai.. Tusin pachtande ho apne dost layi... Par tusin us nu outer nafart deti hovegi par dillon nahi.. Thuvade kol ek khubsurat dil hain jo shayad kise da bura nahi kar sakda . Eh sub waqt di maar hundi waqt hi sanu galat karan te majboor karda hai jo . Rabb te bharoosa na chadeyoo ate agar dil vich sachi ass hai taan meri dua hai sub tik ho javega.

Ate pyaar taan khuda da oh hasiin tohfa hai jo koi kho de vand nahi sakhda sirf mehsoos kar sakhde haan.....

Main vi zindagi vich har kareebi ristaa koya hai.... har kise nu ape haathi door jande vekhaya hai aapan sub katputliyaan hain kuch kar ni sakde sub waqt karda hai..... main apne ghar eniyaan mautaan vekhiyaa ki dard te apniyaan nu khon dard dost jeha lagda hai ate sochda haan kaas oh waqt vaapas aa jave..... meri shayri vi bas eh hi kehdi hai,,,,,,


But main khush rehda haan ate apne dostaan nu vi khush rakhda haan ...
so APNINDER ji smille

eh bani na gal sada khush raho pata ni kad eh zindagi di shaam aa jaye.

JINA JHOTH TE MARNA SACH.....

SO SMILE .... HUN APANA DOST BAN GAYE DON'T WORRY BE HAPPY .....

SMILE ...... I M WITH U MY WISHES WITH U .... SO SMILLE

JASS(SMILLY)
 
reshmi_mutiyar

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN
jass ji, thnx for your kind words,, bohut sohne khiyal aa tuhade,,, sada hi apne naal rakhoongi mein,, bass hassne di koshish karoongi,,
 
smilly

smilly

VIP
smile APNINDER ji please.... please.....please.....
think postive

Khush karne wale taan kam ne duniyaa vich so tusi sada khush rahoo ate apni sohni jahi shayri karde rahoo...

Mera ek soch hai ki dil ton oh likh sakda hai jis nu dard da ehsaas hoye....
Mainu vi kise apne ne kiha si ki likhna na chadin.... dard ko marhaam bana lo yaaro ...... dard asar ghat jayega.....

Zaruri To Nahi

Ki Bataayain Labon Se har Dastaan Apni,
Zabaan Ek Aur Bhi Hoti Hai Izhaar Ki,

Roop rang sub dokha hai.....
Dil se sil milna toh asal vajah hoti hai Pyar ki .....

Socha tha ki vo laut ayega ek din......
Par Lambi ho gayi raat intzaar ki.........................

Hum bhi baithey hain intzaar mein uske......
mera dil mein kami nahin hain uske payar ki......

smile....




 
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