piyar di soghat

jimmi

Elite

• Sep 5, 2007

• #1

Jandi vari sajjan piyar di soghat de giya

hasdian nainaa noo hanjwan di barsat de giya​

jis de wajood naal si chanan charan paase​

oh ilkaape di lami te kali raat de giya​

kadi bhul nah sakan gay oh din raat ​

mera sajjan yadaan di essi baraat de giya​

 

simar

Sim

• Sep 5, 2007

• #2

good...n so touchy.......

 

jimmi

Elite

• Sep 5, 2007

• #3

simar said:

good...n so touchy.......

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thank you very much .

 

jas_jøgåñ

Elite

• Sep 6, 2007

• #4

bahut khoob veer bahut sohna likhde o ....

 

jimmi

Elite

• Sep 6, 2007

• #5

jas_jøgåñ said:

bahut khoob veer bahut sohna likhde o ....

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bahut bahut dhanvaad ji .

 

Konvicted_Jatt

S@RP@NCH

• Sep 6, 2007

• #6

bahut vadiya likhia jimmi.... keep it up....

 

jimmi

Elite

• Sep 6, 2007

• #7

Konvicted_Jatt said:

bahut vadiya likhia jimmi.... keep it up....

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thank you i will try if i get replies no problem i be love to post my poems .
i am proud cause these are my own poems .
aulad changi hoe ya budi sarean noon changi lagdi aa .
te koi usdi tareef kar deve te usda dhanevaad .

 

jaggi633725

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• Feb 16, 2009

• #8

nice.