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:)sohne mukhreya te marda har koi pyaar di kadar oh jaande jo dila te marde ne,yaar yaar ta kehnda har koi yaari di kadar oh jaande jo yaari layi kahceya te v tar de ne,pyar pyar ta karda har koi pyar di kadar oh jaande jo pyar layi zindgi har de ne,laggiyan nibhaun de vaade ta karda har koi laggiyaan di kadar oh jaan de jo vaade layi jaana var de ne,daaru afeem da nasha karda har koi es nashe di kadar oh jaande jo ishq di judaaaaaai ch sarr de ne,zindgi chain naal ta jee lu har koi zindgi di kadar oh jaande jo mushkala da saamna karde ne,pardesi hon diya gallan ta karda har koi pardesi de dard nu oh jaande jo vich baithe vlaitaan kamaiya karde ne,munda jamme di kushi ta karda har koi asal insaan ohi ne jo kudi jammi te kushiya saanziya karde ne,maa baap da pyar pauna chaanda har koi par es jahaan ander kuch badkismat maa baap de vichorre v jar de ne,kitaaba parh ta paas hunda har koi paas hona kinna aukhaa ohna to pucho jo parchiyaaaaa naal degree karde ne,theke to litti daaru da saroor ta kar lainda har koi saroor da mazaaa oh maan de jo ghar di kaddi da ghut bhar de ne,punjabi boli sikh k ta bol lau har koi asal punjabiyat oh jaande jo punjabi boli da dilo maan karde ne,bayimaaani di kamaai kar k jee lu har koi chain di neend ohi saunde jo haq sach di kmaaai kar de ne,"NAV-E" eve punjabi ni kaha sakda har koi asal punjabi ohi jo desh layi jaan kurbaan,yaara utte aan, bhaaiyaa utte maan , mapya da sitkaar, te rabb da simran karde ne.............................
 
SSA Veer sohna likhya dont u think so it looks like an assay an looks odd so please use proper format in which a poem is written so dat it is easily readable.............thx
 

Lily

B.R
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sohne mukhreya te marda har koi pyaar di kadar oh jaande,
jo dila te marde ne,


yaar yaar ta kehnda har koi yaari di kadar oh jaande,
jo yaari layi kahceya te v tar de ne,

pyar pyar ta karda har koi pyar di kadar oh jaande,
jo pyar layi zindgi har de ne,

laggiyan nibhaun de vaade ta karda har koi laggiyaan di kadar oh jaan de,
jo vaade layi jaana var de ne,

daaru afeem da nasha karda har koi es nashe di kadar oh jaande,
jo ishq di judaaaaaai ch sarr de ne,

zindgi chain naal ta jee lu har koi zindgi di kadar oh jaande,
jo mushkala da saamna karde ne,

pardesi hon diya gallan ta karda har koi pardesi de dard nu oh jaande,
jo vich baithe vlaitaan kamaiya karde ne,

munda jamme di kushi ta karda har koi asal insaan ohi ne,
jo kudi jammi te kushiya saanziya karde ne,

maa baap da pyar pauna chaanda har koi par es jahaan ander kuch badkismat maa baap de vichorre v jar de ne,

kitaaba parh ta paas hunda har koi paas hona kinna aukhaa ohna to pucho jo parchiyaaaaa naal degree karde ne,

theke to litti daaru da saroor ta kar lainda har koi saroor da mazaaa oh maan de jo ghar di kaddi da ghut bhar de ne,

punjabi boli sikh k ta bol lau har koi asal punjabiyat oh jaande jo punjabi boli da dilo maan karde ne,

bayimaaani di kamaai kar k jee lu har koi chain di neend ohi saunde jo haq sach di kmaaai kar de ne,

"NAV-E" eve punjabi ni kaha sakda har koi asal punjabi ohi jo desh layi jaan kurbaan,

yaara utte aan, bhaaiyaa utte maan , mapya da sitkaar, te rabb da simran karde ne.........


verrrrrry nice... tfs... :rose :rose :rose
 
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