nadion paar mera yaar pukaare

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LITTLE KITTEN


nadion paar mere maahi da dera,
menu v lai chal paar ve ghaddia,
vekhan nu dowe nain tarasde
male de saada dildaar ve ghaddia,

neewa neewa tu kyon hunda jaave,
dekh dariya te thaathaan marda-e,
bewaffai na karin mere naal,
khurr ke adh wichkaar ve ghaddia,

nadion paar mere maahi da dera,
menu v lai chal paar ve ghaddiya

ban saathi ajj saath nibhaavin,
tenu ro-ro ke sohni pukaardi-e,
yaar milaavin, dekhin naa khur jaavin,
aakhaan mein aaraz guzaar ghaddia

nadion paar mere maahi da dera,
menu v lai chal paar ghaddia,

shuh paani wich mitti ih khursi,
mein iaani ih na jaandi saan,
jeevan kuthadi, aaziz luthadi
aa gayee azal wali taar ghaddia,

nadion paar mere maahi da dera,
lai chal menu paar ve ghaddia,
vekhan nu dove nain mere tarasde,
male dayeen mera dildaar ve ghaddia,​
 
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LITTLE KITTEN
thnx dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

dhee te dhan banaate tu rabba, per teri ik gal samajh ni aayee,,,,,

DHILLON ji,

IK GAL DA RAAZ SIRF PARMATMA DE KOL HAI,,,,,,,,,
oh parmatma ne sare raaz bande nu dite,, per ik raaz apne kol rakhia,,,,,,, incase banda turns against him,,

hahahahahahaha,,,,,,,, thnx for pointing out my mistake,,,,,,,,,,,, hun dekho ji,, mein edit kita
 
grewalsandy

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary
shuh paani wich mitti ih khursi,
mein iaani ih na jaandi saan,
jeevan kuthadi, aaziz luthadi
aa gayee azal wali taar ghaddia,

ehda matlab nahi samajh lagga:

Baki bahoot sohna likhea hai as usual
 
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LITTLE KITTEN
smilly said:
Sub ton pehlaan happy new year.....
Thavanu te pure parivar nu ... Har tamana puri hove thuvadi te lakhaan khusiyaan milan......
Baki dear baba ji di kirpa hai ...... Waqt kadhi ja rehaan haan ...... tusi daso...
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,,,SSA JASS JI AGAIN,, thnxx again for the new year wishes and compliments :hug



SHauKeeN GaBRu said:
nice likheya...but Ghaddiaa?? :an
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sohne veer ji,,, sohni apne ghadde naal gallan kardi aa,,,,, apne kache ghade naa---------- ah ghadda jo sohni ne hath ch faddia
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GS_B441985 said:
Masha allah.
Really very nice poetry.
I have become a fan of yours.
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thnxx dear banga ji,,, aina maan,,,,, i'm honoured,,,,,,,,,,



sunny240 said:
bhaut wadyiea ji asusal...........................
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thnxx dear again,,,,,,,



kudi_patole_wargi said:
bahut sohna likheya aa reshu:y

@ sp tenu ghadde da nahin patta :slap
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thnxx didi g,, tusi bohut pyar dinde,,,, parmatma kare tusi sada hi khush raho,,,,,:hug ,,,,,,,,,,,, han g SP bohut bhole:baby:baby aa ,,, ghadde da ni pata ki hunda
 
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LITTLE KITTEN
grewalsandy said:
shuh paani wich mitti ih khursi,
mein iaani ih na jaandi saan,
jeevan kuthadi, aaziz luthadi
aa gayee azal wali taar ghaddia,

ehda matlab nahi samajh lagga:

Baki bahoot sohna likhea hai as usual
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thnxx dear for the compliments,,,,,,,





hun matlab--------

shuh paani wich mitti ih khursi, mein iaani ih na jaandi saan,== wagde paani ch kachi mitti khur jayegi, mein bekhabar, ya bholi( iaani) ih nahi jaandi c


jeevan kuthadi, aaziz luthadi
aa gayee azal wali taar ghaddia,,,,,,,,,,,meri anmol te bholi jawani aiwe hi lut ho rahi aa, hun lagda mera antt (end) aa chalia,, per uss pehlaan mera yaar milaade ve ghaddia
 
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LITTLE KITTEN


kachi shayaraa mein,,, ​

ih kavita 3 bhaasha ch hai,,,,,,,, hindi, punjabi, te urdu,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

kavita jahi suche mottiyan di ladi,,,,,,,,, SIRF 1 BHAASHA ch honi chahidi aa,,,,,,,,thnxxx for the ucha hungara,,,,
 
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