Moderators ਅੱਗੇ ਕਾਹਦਾ ਜੋਰ (RAVI SANDHU)

RaviSandhu

SandhuBoyz.c0m

• Nov 19, 2010

• #1

RAVI SANDHU,
18 NOV 20010,
09.56PM, ROME

Moderators ਅੱਗੇ ਕਾਹਦਾ ਜੋਰ,
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moderators ਲਿਖ ਦਿੰਦੇ ਉੱਤੇ unknows.
ਮੈਂ ਲਿਖਦਾ ਹਾਂ, ਜਿੰਨਾ writers ਦਾ ਪਤਾ ਹੋਵੇ ਨਾਮ,
ਕਿਸੇ ਦੇ ਲਿਖੇ ਚ ਮੈਂ ਆਪਣਾ ਨਾਮ ਪਾ ਕੇ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੋਣਾ ਚਾਹੁੰਦਾ ਬਦਨਾਮ।
ਰਵੀ ਨੇ ਖੋਲੇ ਆਪਣੇ ਦਿਲ ਦੇ ਰਾਜ਼,
ਕਿਸੇ ਦੇ ਅਖਰਾਂ ਚ ਆਪਣਾ ਨਾਮ ਪਾਉਣਾ,
ਸਾਡੇ ਪਿੰਡਾ 'ਚ ਨਹੀਂ ਏਹੋ ਜਿਹੇ ਰਿਵਾਜ਼ ।

 

gurpreetpunjabishayar

dil apna punabi

• Nov 19, 2010

• #2

ਉਹ ਵਾਹ ਵਈ ਵਾਹ ਰਵੀ ,,ਨਹੀ ਰੀਸਾ ਤੇਰੀਆ

 

RaviSandhu

SandhuBoyz.c0m

• Nov 19, 2010

• #3

Dhanwaad ji shukriyea

 

Saini Sa'aB

K00l$@!n!

• Nov 19, 2010

• #4

22 g lines taan tusi vadhiya likhiya but tuhanu edan kyon lagda ki moderator kujh galat kar rahe aa

je tusi kujh share kita te writer da name ni pata taan unknown likhan ch ki harz aa ....

shayad tuhanu last week de vakye baare ni pata oston baad hi eh rule baneya ki je tuhadi rachna taan apna nau likho je nahin pata taan unknown likh deyo.....

mainu ehde vich koi b marri gall ni lagdi te naa koi mod di galti lagdi aa

 

RaviSandhu

SandhuBoyz.c0m

• Nov 19, 2010

• #5

KOOL SAINI sahab thx 4 appriciate,, 22ji menu last week bare kuj ni paaa..
dooji gall unknown likhna keo jaroori hai??? menu ta es gall di samjh ni aauni..
mere khayal writers da name jaanan da kise nu koi intrest ni hunda..
j ena intrest hove PM ya VM karke saade kolo puchan visitors..
mera khayal mai 6 months to ithe posts kar reha haan kise ne ajj tak writer da naam ni puchea..
mai ek site ch poem likhi ci.. jisda writer mai gurpreet likhea si,
menu kise visiterne dasea ki eh dev tharike wale ne likhi hai mai katt de DEV ji da name likhta..
J moderator nu writer da name pataa hoe ta edit kare..
ya post karan wala edit kare..
jidda main post kiti koi poem esnu koi hor edit kare ta ki faiyeda..
es baare koi dasega zara?

 

Saini Sa'aB

K00l$@!n!

• Nov 19, 2010

• #6

22 je tuhanu pata hai kise writer da name fer tuhanu likhna chahida but je nahin pata fer ki fayda koi tuhanu koi pm kare jaa vm ............fer v tusi ehi kehna ke writer da pata nahin...........nale jo rule bane ne kise specific section de oh taan follow karne hi chahide ne .............i think

 

P

P-_-u-_-n-_-j-_-a-_-b

Well-known member

• Nov 19, 2010

• #7

22 Kannun Sareya De Layi Ekko Aaa Ame Naa Tension Vich Pavo Mitro

22 Tusi writer da nam likh diya karo Nai Ta Mod Ne Ta Apni Duty Te Lage He Rehna Jida Ohna Nu Theek Lagda Ohda Kari Jana

Esli Gusse Wali Koi Gal Nai Hagi veer Tusi V apni Jagha Theek Ho Te Mod V Ohna Nu Sarkar Walo Hukam aaa Unknow Likhan Da Te Bachare Ke Karn

Kul Mila Ke Eh Central Govt Da Panga

 

Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• Nov 19, 2010

• #8

Writer name is mandatory to mention,, bcoz last week few people complained regarding copy rights,,

i don't know why we guys are debating on all such things again and again here,, even everything is clearly mentioned in rules,,,,, read them carefully, it will answer u everything..

https://www.unp.me/f30/rules-poetry-section-106023/

 

gurpreetpunjabishayar

dil apna punabi

• Nov 19, 2010

• #9

Moderators ਅੱਗੇ ਕਾਹਦਾ ਜੋਰ,
ਤੁਸੀਂ ਤਕੜੇ ਹੋ, ਅਸੀਂ ਮਾੜੇ ਹਾਂ, ਅਸੀਂ ਡਰਦੇ ਹਾਂ

Moderators ਤੇ ਤਵਾ ਲੈ ਗਿਆ

 

Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• Nov 19, 2010

• #10

koi taggda ni,, koi maada ni,,, bas gallan ne fizool diya..
mann sab di yaara,, bas gallan ne eh asool diya...

mein unknown ni likhna,, mein writer daa naa ni likhna
eh gallan kar,,, yaara tu chauna e ki dikhnaa?

J likhya e tu kujh appe,, tan naa apna likh sajjna
aa akhran di mandi, te peedan de mul wik sajjna,

kise de likhe akhran nu satkaar dao
apna kabza kar k ohte,,, haqq ohda naa maar dao

eh gallan kar koi mull ni painaa
JB kamle da bass ehna kehnaa...
chadd eh gallan ool jalool diya,,
koi taggda ni,, koi maada ni,,, bas gallan ne fizool diya..
mann sab di yaara,, bas gallan ne eh asool diya...

 

P

P-_-u-_-n-_-j-_-a-_-b

Well-known member

• Nov 19, 2010

• #11

Bilkul Sahi Keha JB Janaab

 

Saini Sa'aB

K00l$@!n!

• Nov 19, 2010

• #12

JB 22 Well said

 

marjana.bhatia

Kehnde Badnaam Bada

• Nov 20, 2010

• #13

JB khoob likhya,,,

 

santok

Well-known member

• Nov 20, 2010

• #14

jthank you jb 22 ji,

 

RaviSandhu

SandhuBoyz.c0m

• Nov 20, 2010

• #15

JB ya kise hor to menu koi gussa gilaa nahi.. oh apna farz nibha rahe ne..

 

RaviSandhu

SandhuBoyz.c0m

• Nov 20, 2010

• #16

Ravi Sandhu
5.03pm
Rome

Tusi takde ho Asi maade haan...
tuhadiya udaariyan ambran to uchiyan aa..
te sadiyan pattna naal yaariyan aa..
asin chahunde aaye naam JB waang shayeran ch..
likhda sohna banda vi changa..
pataa ni keo pa reha UNKNOWN waala panga..
asin kadi kadi apna vi likhde haan..
hanjhua te peeda de mul vi vike haan..
kdi dil farol ke dikh kidda dilte zakham aa,,
har ik akhar shayer da dasda dil di gal,
te socha, pyaar te neet bayaan..
mai keha haaan yaara ehna to anjaan..
gall sunn meri bakiyan da ta menu pata ni yaar,
mai ta karda haan sohne likhe da hamesha satkaar..
ajai ta nawa nawa rakhea shayeri ch pair..
ajai hai hanera raah bahut lamba te door..
Moderators wala likh asin kaiyan de akh ch rarke haan..
Tusi takde ho Asi maade haan...
tuhadiya udaariyan ambran to uchiyan aa..
te sadiyan pattna naal yaariyan aa..