meri second poem.lolzzzzzzzzzz

Pardesan Punjaban said:

ik hor poem likhi
heheeh
hasioo nah meri wording ton
one day i'll get there

DAR​

Pata Nahi Kion Mainu Kayie Vaar Anjaani Jihi
Jindgi Vich Jaan Noo Dar Lagda​

Kade Sochdi kamliye Ihi Aa Jag Dee Reet
Bhala Kade Dheea Ne Vi Laie Pekia Naal Preet
Fer Achanak Hee Babul Da Vehda
Chadan Vaare Sochan Te Dil Bharda​

Kade Sochdi kamliye Jindgi Vi Ik Khel
Is De Kalakara Naal Karna Paina Tainu Mail
Fer Achanak Mainu Apne Hee
Gudia Patole Chadan Noo Nah Dil Karda​

Kade Sochadi kamliye Jindgi Agge Jaan Da Naam
Ihi hai Jindgi dee kitab Da Path
Fer Achank Jindgi Da Agala sabak
Parn Ton Mera Rom Rom Kambda​

Fer Sochadi Kamliye Chale Javegi Jithe Likhia Tera daana
Rab Da Mitha Karke Tun Man Lae hun Bhanaa
Fer Achanak Hee man ch swaal uthe
Rab Dee Baniye Kismet Te Mera Jor Kion Nahi Chalda​

Kade Sochdi Kamliye Aaj Laie Jioun Hee Tera Apna
Jindgi Ch Kee Bhrosa Aa Kal Da
Fer Achanak Mera Dil Vaar Vaar
Samjhouna Te Vi Samjhan Noo Nahi manda​

Main Te Apne App Kol Swaal Push Ke Thak Chuki
Ihna Swaala Da Nah Koie Hal Lbhda
Pata Nahi Kion Mainu Kayie Vaar
Anjaani Jihi Jindgi Vich Jaan Noo Dar Lagda
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Pardesan
27.01.2007​

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pp ji kya baat hai........



maza aa gaya ji aapki poem parde ke.......

sherdil said:

Bhen Meri Hun GeetKaar Ban Sakdi
Bahut vadhiya likhiya

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sahi gal kahi aa sherdil ne.........

dhana_jatt said:

bohat sohni poem likhi aa ji... thnx for sharing

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thaks aa ji tusi paran laie time kadia

je nah vi parde jabardasti para laini si thude kol

so u don't have any choice

jonty said:

Wah Wah Wah....... .....kamal kar ti jeee........eni vadhia kavitaa...

Asin taan tuhade FAN ho gayee........tuhada asli talent hun sahmne aa raha.....


Excellent jee.........sachi har ik word da talmel te wajan bahut sahi c......very well done.....

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thanks aa ji pasand karn laie

sherdil said:

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thanks aa ji full sohne aa

sherdil said:

Bhen Meri Hun GeetKaar Ban Sakdi
Bahut vadhiya likhiya

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thanks aa veer ji

singer laie gaane likhane

lovable_mani said:

pp ji kya baat hai........



maza aa gaya ji aapki poem parde ke.......

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thanks aa ji pasand karn laie

lovable_mani said:

sahi gal kahi aa sherdil ne.........

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