Meri Choti Poem Mere Sohne veer te.....:)

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy
pata nahi aaj mainu chotte veer dee baht yaad aa rahi si:(
kaafi miss kar rahi si os noo:wubhim
so thora jiha os vaare likhan dee koish kiti:ch
i know poem bahut vadi aa:an
per u know veer vaare te jina kaho ohna ghat hunda:w
bas i love him heapzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz:kik :kik







CHOTE VEER NAAL
BACHPAN DIA PYARIA YAADA







Sohna Sohna Veer Meria Akhia Da Noor
Nazar Nah Lag Jaave Hai Oh Mera Garoor
Hai Hamesha Mere Dil De Bahut Kareeb
Par Milan Ton Hai Main Veer Noo Bahut Majboor


Oh Vi Din Si Jadon Asi Ikathe Khelde Si
Kade Ikatia Ne Cricket Khedani Kade Ghar Ghar Ch Rotia Velde Si
Kade Hasde Si Kade Miti De Khidounia Naal Melde Si
Hamesa Ik Doosre Dia Kamlia Shrarta Noo Jhelde Si



Kade Veer Noo Munh Bana Ke Hasouna
Kade Veer Noo Maa Dee Kut Ton Luko Ke Bachouna
Je Veer De Thori Vi Sat Lag Jaani Te
Pahela Mera Hanjooua Noo Akhia Ch Nadi Vaang Vahouna


Rakhari De Din Veer Da Saanu Khijouna
Rakhi Nah Banan Da Natak Karke Saanu Satouna
Tohafe De Tor Te Kade Kade Kanna Dia Vaalia
Te Kade Hatti Vale Ton Gal Dee Gaani Lae Ke Aouna


Kade Kothe Te Saada Ikathe Patang Jhrouna
And Os Da Mere Hath Dor Noo Farouna
Kade Kade Mera Kothe Te Hee Veer Laie Roti Liouna
Te Badle Ch Os Ne Meri Saffie Ch Madad Karouna



Kade School Laie Veer Ne Nah Uthana Te
Main Veer Dia Vaar Vaar Minta Karke Jagouna
School Da Kam Nah Karke Nah Jaan Da Bahana Banouna
Kade Veer Da Rus Jaana Te Mera Pyar Naal Os Noo Manouna


Mera Gusse Ho Ke Veer Noo Parouna
And Veer Ne Pyara Jiha Munh Bana Ke
Mere Kol Apna Saara School Da Kam Karouna
Oh Vi Din Si Veer Da Kade Hasana Te Kade Mainu Hasouna




Bas Ih Ardas Parmatma mere Veer Noo Tathi Vah Nah Lage
Os Noo Kujh Hon Vaare Sochan te Dil Te Peed Jihi Hon Lage
Dunia Bhar Dia Dher Saaria Khushia Milan Veer Noo
Te Mere Veer De Saare Dukh Aa Jaan Mere Hise




Ihi Bhen Dee Vaar Vaar Ardass mere Parmatma
Saada Bhen Bhra Da Pyar Hamesha Bania Rahe
Kise Chandare Dee Saanu Buri Nazar Nah Lage
Bas Saadi Is Tara Hasdia Kheldia Dee Saari Umer Lange
Dukha Da Kaala Parshava Hamesha Talia Rahe



Parmatma Hamesha Apna Mihar Bharia Hath Mere
Chan Varge Sohane Jihe Chote Veer Te Banie Rakhe
Bas Ihi Nimani Jihi Bhen Tere Kol Vaar Vaar
Apne Veer Dia Khushia Ton Ilawa Hor Kujh Nah Mange
:pr:pr:pr:pr




Pardesan
16.02.2007
:kik :kik
:wub:wub u veer ji
 

Angel_Eyes

Done Deal !
oye sandiye , tusi ta professional ban gaye
sachi bahut sohna likheya
bachpan di ikk ikk yaad tusi kinne sohne akhra ch piro ditti
God Bless u sando, rabb har veer nu tuahde vargi bhen deve, te har bhen nu tuhade veere varga veer jiste bhen nu aina pyar aawe.
beautiful, sando tuhadiya poems bahut si sohniya hundiya ne, zindagi de aam jehe falsafe tusi aine sohne words ch likhde o ki har banda apne aap nu ehna naal connect kar sakda hai
Amazingly brilliant
 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy
oye sandiye , tusi ta professional ban gaye
sachi bahut sohna likheya
bachpan di ikk ikk yaad tusi kinne sohne akhra ch piro ditti
God Bless u sando, rabb har veer nu tuahde vargi bhen deve, te har bhen nu tuhade veere varga veer jiste bhen nu aina pyar aawe.
beautiful, sando tuhadiya poems bahut si sohniya hundiya ne, zindagi de aam jehe falsafe tusi aine sohne words ch likhde o ki har banda apne aap nu ehna naal connect kar sakda hai
Amazingly brilliant
:gig:gig
aaj veer vaare sochdi si so aaj ih likh diti:gig
jo dil ch ayia likh dita par long ho gaie:an
thanks navo parn laie:hug
kaafi long si:gig

and thanks for ur wishes ji:w
and i guess har bhen bhra de pyar noo parmatma kise dee naar nah lagve
thora vakhra jiha hee rishta hunda aa ajeeb jiha:yes:kik
 

full_taur

Member
Sandiye, very very good...This is brilliant. too good.and yaar tusi te professional hoyi jande ho hun..

Khair saadi vi yeho wishes ne bhen bhara dono sukhi rehan de parmatam unna de ang sang sahayi hove....
 

SHauKeeN GaBRu

Chardi Kala
poem read karke main aehi sochda c, kidda pyaar tuhade doven bro-sis vich.....

sadde te aethe War chaldi rahi shuru ton >haha...hun ajj kal ceasefire chal reha meri middle wali sis naal, thori bahut gal kar layi di....nahi taan har waari bomb chalde :gig
 
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