.: mere dil di pyaas :.

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jime tutia ambar ton tara

• Jan 23, 2007

• #1

mainu maaf kari ,tere te kita nahi wishwaash yaara
tere naal hai saadi zindagi nibhaun di aas yaara
jis din tenu bhul gia ,us din ban jana main laash yaara
main tere naal jiwa te pehla mara ,edda howe kaash yaara
main sab kuj tenu de ditta ,mahiwaal ne ta sirf khwaya c maas yaara
main kalla hi reh gia ,sare hoye ishq vich paas yaara
pata ni kidda parhde ehnu ,menu na aayi eh raas yaara
tuhi sade lai sada dil ,te tuhi sadi pyaas yaara

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punjabi pride

Member

• Jan 23, 2007

• #2

awwwww bhut sohni aa. tusi ehna sohna kida likhde aa kise nu kuch dasan di lor nai pendi sara kuch poem ee das dindi aa how u feel. ur awsome navji.

 

beautiful

my SEXY love!!!!

• Jan 23, 2007

• #3

awwwwww so sweeet!!!! this is like my buddy. after reading this poem i dont think so ur girl frend is mad at u anymore. she is soo lucky that she has U.

this is really good poem.
keep it up.
thanx for sharing..

 

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jime tutia ambar ton tara

• Jan 23, 2007

• #4

beautiful said:

awwwwww so sweeet!!!! this is like my buddy. after reading this poem i dont think so ur girl frend is mad at u anymore. she is soo lucky that she has U.

this is really good poem.
keep it up.
thanx for sharing..

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thanks

 

nav-3

jime tutia ambar ton tara

• Jan 23, 2007

• #5

punjabi pride said:

awwwww bhut sohni aa. tusi ehna sohna kida likhde aa kise nu kuch dasan di lor nai pendi sara kuch poem ee das dindi aa how u feel. ur awsome navji.

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bas ji kade kade eho jiha mood hunda k apne aap hi likhia janda

 

jatt_on_ferrari

Member

• Jan 23, 2007

• #6

nice stuff nav ...its gr8 ..thanks a lot for sharing

 

❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤

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• Jan 23, 2007

• #7

GGGrrrEEEaaaTTT.....NaV Jiiiii

 

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spicegal

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• Jan 23, 2007

• #8

thanx good one

 

jaggi633725

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• Feb 24, 2009

• #9

nice.

 

Rajat

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• Feb 27, 2009

• #10

tfs..