maut nu v tarpha ditta

babbu*a*rex

Member

• Apr 1, 2008

• #1

bulbula utheya zindagi ch dukh da,
main kamjor ghabraa geya,
karna c jis dukh da muqabla,
main khud hi ohnu appna yaar bana leya,
nasheyan de changul vich khud nu phasa dita,
"PREET" di maut tan pehlan v attal hi c,
par ehna nasheyan ne maut nu v tarpha ditta

 

Lily

B.R

Staff member

• Apr 1, 2008

• #2

nice 1.....thanx for sharing....

 

Loveye

mauja maan di

• Apr 1, 2008

• #3

tfs.....................

 

HoneY

MaaPeya Da LaaDLa

• Apr 1, 2008

• #4

nice........

 

babbu*a*rex

Member

• Apr 2, 2008

• #5

honey said:

nice........

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nice aa but phir v kasak dil di puri bahar ni kadh sakeya.
anyway thanx 4 ur compliments

 

babbu*a*rex

Member

• Apr 2, 2008

• #6

lily said:

nice 1.....thanx for sharing....

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zindagi de kujh pal share kar ke intresting ban jande ne. thx jee.

 

smilly

VIP

• Apr 2, 2008

• #7

Nice one dear....... Ek dard jeha hai es vich.......

 

babbu*a*rex

Member

• Apr 2, 2008

• #8

smilly said:

Nice one dear....... Ek dard jeha hai es vich.......

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thanx jee dard da tan nazara jee eh tan appna pakka friend aa.
kade sath ni chadda. anyway hasde vasde raho.

 

rimpy_alone

tere bina zindagi se koi

• Apr 4, 2008

• #9

Maana ke aapki nazaron main kuch nahin hain hum.....
Magar unse jakar puchiye jinhein hasil nahi hain hum

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Apr 7, 2008

• #10

SSA preet.....

Vadiya likhea hai veere... tfs....

par aa nasheya wala kam ni jachda mainu.... Pyaar nahi milea ta esda matlab eh ta nahi k apna aap rol lavo....

tutte dil ch athah energy(shakti) hundi aa... je change pase lavo ta banda kite da kite pahunch janda... te je marhe pase lagna ta veere ehdi lorh hi nahi... baki tu aap samajhdaar aa..

Ha te tera signature bahla kaim lageya mainu...

 

babbu*a*rex

Member

• Jun 9, 2008

• #11

grewalsandy said:

SSA preet.....

Vadiya likhea hai veere... tfs....

par aa nasheya wala kam ni jachda mainu.... Pyaar nahi milea ta esda matlab eh ta nahi k apna aap rol lavo....

tutte dil ch athah energy(shakti) hundi aa... je change pase lavo ta banda kite da kite pahunch janda... te je marhe pase lagna ta veere ehdi lorh hi nahi... baki tu aap samajhdaar aa..

Ha te tera signature bahla kaim lageya mainu...

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yeh ur right brother....but kayi vaari sanu pata v hunda k agge raste vich gara hai par phir v oss de vichon langhna peh janda..anyway thanx 4 ur sweat reply mitra...hasda vasda reh.....

 

Konvicted_Jatt

S@RP@NCH

• Jun 10, 2008

• #12

bahut vadiya ji........tfs

 

amani23

Member

• Jun 10, 2008

• #13

very nice dard ta thudaa jalahk reha hai

 

babbu*a*rex

Member

• Jun 10, 2008

• #14

Konvicted_Jatt said:

bahut vadiya ji........tfs

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thanx 4 ur comments mitra...tc...
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babbu*a*rex

Member

• Jun 10, 2008

• #15

amani23 said:

very nice dard ta thudaa jalahk reha hai

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dard ni aeh tan mitran di khushi jhalkdi aa....dard nu khushi bana ke peen da nazara hi hor aa........
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sunny240

Elite

• Jun 11, 2008

• #16

nice one veer,,,,,,,,,,,

 

babbu*a*rex

Member

• Jun 14, 2008

• #17

sunny240 said:

nice one veer,,,,,,,,,,,

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thanx 4 ur compliments mitra........
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P-a-r-d-e-s-i

Ranja

• Jun 15, 2008

• #18

yaaaarr
i have no wordssssssssss

 

Ak47_Riskykz

Rambo

• Jun 15, 2008

• #19

P-a-r-d-e-s-i said:

yaaaarr
i have no wordssssssssss

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Thode jihe mere toon uddare mang la!!!!!

 

Ak47_Riskykz

Rambo

• Jun 15, 2008

• #20

Nice poetry bro!!!!!
Bt Mainu thodi ending samajh ni ayi!!