mannaa layi da

smilly

VIP

• Jun 6, 2007

• #1

Ruthe jo yaar taan aape mannaa layi da..
Apnaa aap nu aape hi samjaa layi da.....
pata ni kadon aa jave shaam zindagi di......
begaaneyaa nu vi gal naal laa layi da......

Milde ne lakhaan log es zindagi di gaddi vich yaroo......
Har naal dil nahi vata layi da.....
Mul pyaar da paan bada aukha mitro......
Pyaar vich apnaa app mitaa layi da........

Layi hove je saanj umaraan kisi naal....
taan saahn akhri tak saath nibha layi da........
hussan,javaani,maape te yaar mudh nahi labhne.....
Enaa saareyaa nu dilon naal chaah layi da........

---------- pyar ghoodha te sacha pa liyi da ------------------------------------ Sajnaa nu gal la layi da--------------------

 

•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤°

Elite

• Jun 6, 2007

• #2

tooo gudd
​

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Jun 6, 2007

• #3

bahut sohna likheya te share karan li thx

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 7, 2007

• #4

•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤° said:

tooo gudd​

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thanx ji........

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 7, 2007

• #5

kudi_patole_wargi said:

bahut sohna likheya te share karan li thx

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thanx ji.......

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Jun 7, 2007

• #6

very nice aa g

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 7, 2007

• #7

Pardesan Punjaban said:

very nice aa g

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thanx ji......

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Jun 7, 2007

• #8

Milde ne lakhaan log es zindagi di gaddi vich yaroo......
Har naal dil nahi vata layi da.....


dil kambakht,, ik vaar vatt ke doosre de kol jana hi nahi chonda,,,,,,,,,,,,



bohut sohna likhiya dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,vakiya hi- kabil-e tareef hai

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 7, 2007

• #9

reshmi_mutiyar said:

Milde ne lakhaan log es zindagi di gaddi vich yaroo......
Har naal dil nahi vata layi da.....


dil kambakht,, ik vaar vatt ke doosre de kol jana hi nahi chonda,,,,,,,,,,,,



bohut sohna likhiya dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,vakiya hi- kabil-e tareef hai

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thanx dear.........

BUT EH SACH HAI DIL EK NAAL HI VATADA HAI...

JIS TARAH HAR HATH MILAON VALA DOST NAHI HONDA....

USI TARAH PYAAR BAAR BAAR NAHIN HUNDA

MERE KOLE LIKHAN NU BHUT KUCH HAI KITHE SHABAD NAHIN MILDE , KADE WAQT NAHIN HONDA...... OH TOUCH NAHIN AUNADA JO MAIN LIKHNA CHAHUNDA HAAN.....


BUT UR SHAAYRI AND WORD R VERY TOUCHING ...

ONCE AGAIN THANX........

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Jun 7, 2007

• #10

smilly
BUT UR SHAAYRI AND WORD R VERY TOUCHING ...


tusi sohna likhde ho,, bass koshish kari jaoo,, thnx 4 complimenting me too dear

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 7, 2007

• #11

reshmi_mutiyar said:

smilly
BUT UR SHAAYRI AND WORD R VERY TOUCHING ...


tusi sohna likhde ho,, bass koshish kari jaoo,, thnx 4 complimenting me too dear

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ACTUALLY MERE KOL WAQT KAM HUNDA HAI.... MAIN EK MEDIA GROUP(PRESS) VICH HAAN ATE .IN MEDIA TIME HI NAHIN HUNDA .... IS LAYI JADOON TIME MILDA HAI JO DIL VICH AUNDA HAI US VELE HI LIKH JANDA HAAN.....

APPAN TAAN BAS LIKHDE HAAN ..... SOHNA TAAN TUSI ATE BAAKI MEMBERS LIKHDE HO..........


smirk smirk smirk

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Jun 7, 2007

• #12

nahin hi eho jehi koi gal nahin tusi v bahut sohna likheya aa...te jado media to time milda aa udo ithe aa jaya karo

reshu sohna likheya aa

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 8, 2007

• #13

thanx Simran ....

thuvanu mera likihaya changa lagya.....
vaise main savere ek vaar agar office aana haan taan jaroor unp te anaa haan... because ehte mehak hai punjab di.....

unp de sare dostan te rabb diyaan meharan rehan......

te ache ton acha likhan ehte aa ke acha vi lagda hai.....

......

 

jaggi633725

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• Feb 17, 2009

• #14

nice.