kinne waade kitte ohnu, .....

Royal_Punjaban

»»K@mli!««

• May 19, 2009

• #1

kinne waade kitte ohnu, menu yaad v ne koi....
ohne har ikk akhar khunwaya hoya c.....​

mera har lafaz ohnu yaad c zubani.........
enna ishq ohne haddan ch vasaya hoya c....​

oh sochda c rehnda, lai javega viah ke.....
de dil nu tasalli , us samjaya hoya c.......​

eh jandi c mein ,bahut aukhian ne rahan...
majboorian nu meri , us ton chupaya hoya c....​

fir paya jo vichora, ohne hanju na vahaya.....
menu naina vich jo us ne vasaya hoya c.....​

rabb nalo vadh mera naam c oh lainda......
ohne bullan nu chuaya hoya c...........​

haar javangi is ishq to, eh jandi c main.....
is sach nu mein, jande hoya v dabaya hoya c...... ​

 

bapu da laadla

VIP

• May 20, 2009

• #2

rp ji dil d gehrai cho likhia lagda???? nice aa ji

 

kit walker

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Staff member

• May 20, 2009

• #3

Tusi Dil di Jis Gehrahi toon likhde ho Acha Lagda hai. Keep it up

 

Royal_Punjaban

»»K@mli!««

• May 20, 2009

• #4

thnaks ji,,,,,,,,,

 

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$hokeen J@tt

Prime VIP

• May 20, 2009

• #5

yaar......mere kol words nai haige kehan layi ki kinna sohna likhya hai tusi..........dil di badi dhungai ch ja ke likhi lagdi hai...........its tooo nice yaar..........

 

Royal_Punjaban

»»K@mli!««

• May 20, 2009

• #6

ranjeetsingh_86 said:

yaar......mere kol words nai haige kehan layi ki kinna sohna likhya hai tusi..........dil di badi dhungai ch ja ke likhi lagdi hai...........its tooo nice yaar..........

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thanks for liking ji....

 

Birha Tu Sultan

Kitu

• May 31, 2009

• #7

what a nice shayri

 

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ballyuppal

Member

• Jun 1, 2009

• #8

hello,i am bally.ur poetry is too good.

 

Royal_Punjaban

»»K@mli!««

• Jul 3, 2009

• #9

thanks every one.......

 

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kanwal_preet

New member

• Jul 27, 2009

• #10

bahut hi vadiya likhya hai ji tusi...dil di gehrahi nu shabda naal maap ke pesh kita..very nice

 

$un$hyn

hIs )..Prince$$..(

• Jul 27, 2009

• #11

nice sis..