Kinjh likhan mein geet?

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bs_grewal

Member

• Nov 26, 2007

• #1

Kinjh likhan mein geet, mere kol dard nai geeta lai,
Kive rovaan mein? do hanjhu nai mere kol moye meetaa lai.

Meri manzil taa aje bahut door hai maitho,
Mere kol waqt nai sajan preetaa lai.

Mera payar v maitho kho laina ohna ne,
Sab kuchh waarda aaya mein jinha lok-reeta lai.

Tainu mein ajj de dina ki deva ai yaar mere,
Do mubarkaa hi nai mere kol ehna eeda lai.

Ik waar aa k payas naina di bhujhaa jaavi,
Nai ta marke v rehna tarsde tere deeda lai.

'Baljit' jo sada hi agge paindiaa aayeeaa,
Ajj kyu mein jinda raha ohna hi tarikaa lai.


thanks
Baljit Singh Grewal
bs_grewal@yahoo.com

 

jahanzaib

**Jeem~Jatt**

• Nov 26, 2007

• #2

Ik waar aa k payas naina di bhujhaa jaavi,
Nai ta marke v rehna tarsde tere deeda lai.

buhat vadya Paa ji

 

jahanzaib

**Jeem~Jatt**

• Nov 26, 2007

• #3

eh ghazal menu buhat pasand i hai Grewal ji, jay tusi bura na manaao tay main es nu shahmukhi akhran wich likh ke apnay blog tay laa lawan?

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Nov 26, 2007

• #4

Good likhea hai veer ji, keep it up...... tfs

 

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bs_grewal

Member

• Nov 26, 2007

• #5

thanks friends, jahanzaib pls go ahead.

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Nov 27, 2007

• #6

nice one...........

 

jahanzaib

**Jeem~Jatt**

• Nov 27, 2007

• #7

Shahmukhi


Baljit here is your ghazal written in shahmukhi, enjoy

 

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bs_grewal

Member

• Nov 27, 2007

• #8

thanks gulabo.
janab Jahanzaib, i don't know shahmukhi, may be other will enjoy it.
thank u very much.

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 27, 2007

• #9

nice one dear.....

 

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bs_grewal

Member

• Nov 27, 2007

• #10

thanks jass

smilly said:

nice one dear.....

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jas_jøgåñ

Elite

• Dec 1, 2007

• #11

nice one thanx 4 sharing

 

arpita

Prime VIP

• Dec 1, 2007

• #12

hey jahanzaib nice that u put it in urdu.... it's a lovely ghazal grewal g

 

Konvicted_Jatt

S@RP@NCH

• Dec 1, 2007

• #13

bahut vadiya grewal ji.....

 

jahanzaib

**Jeem~Jatt**

• Jan 24, 2009

• #14

arpita said:

hey jahanzaib nice that u put it in urdu.... it's a lovely ghazal grewal g

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How come its urdu arpita? It is punjabi written in shahmukhi

 

Rajat

Prime VIP

• Jan 25, 2009

• #15

nice

tfs...

 

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jagdeep101

Member

• Jan 25, 2009

• #16

nice bai g

 

jaggi633725

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• Feb 4, 2009

• #17

nice.