Ki hoya picho mitran da hal vekh lai......

SHauKeeN GaBRu said:

bai hun tannu vi kuchh hogaya????

, btw good poem...PPji apne Jas kolon classaan le lavo, rhyming changi karda ae

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jas_sandhu said:

kai dhoke kha ke betha aa....msa jind bcha ke bethe aa
oh dil toh lah ke bethe ne..asi dil te la ke betha haa

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fe tou piti peeke likheya
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•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤° said:

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bot sohni likhi ae ji roj piya karo​

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main v try kardi aa...​

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•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤° said:

fe tou piti peeke likheya​

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jas_sandhu said:

na meri bhehn tuh try na kri.......mere veer minu maar dena ee

vese pasand karan lai thankju ji.....

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hun taan grum karli main.....
hun dekho kmaal...
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daaru peeni badi hai aukhi....
bot hundi ae eh taan kaudi....
mainu peende wekh loki honge heraan...
ki hoyea haal peeke mitraan da aake wekh lao.....


mainu kyou peeno rokde o hun waerno....
hun taan andar chalegi mere....
d...........
hhhhhhh

shayad utargi hun kuch likheya hi ni jareya....

fe tou peeke aawaa....







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jas_sandhu said:

tusi tah jani jann ho malkoo

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•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤° said:

hun taan grum karli main.....
hun dekho kmaal...
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daaru peeni badi hai aukhi....
bot hundi ae eh taan kaudi....
mainu peende wekh loki honge heraan...
ki hoyea haal peeke mitraan da aake wekh lao.....


mainu kyou peeno rokde o hun waerno....
hun taan andar chalegi mere....
d...........
hhhhhhh

shayad utargi hun kuch likheya hi ni jareya....

fe tou peeke aawaa....

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•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤° said:

hun taan grum karli main.....

hun dekho kmaal...​

daaru peeni badi hai aukhi....
bot hundi ae eh taan kaudi....
mainu peende wekh loki honge heraan...
ki hoyea haal peeke mitraan da aake wekh lao.....​

mainu kyou peeno rokde o hun waerno....
hun taan andar chalegi mere....
d...........
hhhhhhh​

shayad utargi hun kuch likheya hi ni jareya....​

fe tou peeke aawaa....​

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.......tusi tah kamal hi kar diti

SHauKeeN GaBRu said:

>haha ae ki likhi jaande ho >haha


oops

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jas waangu peeke likhi gayi

u hasing o
hasna mana ae



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jas_sandhu said:

.......tusi tah kamal hi kar diti

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tuhade tou sikheya kamaal karna
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•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤° said:

hun taan grum karli main.....

hun dekho kmaal...​

daaru peeni badi hai aukhi....
bot hundi ae eh taan kaudi....
mainu peende wekh loki honge heraan...
ki hoyea haal peeke mitraan da aake wekh lao.....​

mainu kyou peeno rokde o hun waerno....
hun taan andar chalegi mere....
d...........
hhhhhhh​

shayad utargi hun kuch likheya hi ni jareya....​

fe tou peeke aawaa....​

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Pardesan Punjaban said:

bahut sohna lihia ji

lagda nahi khadi peeti ch likhia
vaase kee peeta si chaa kee lasso ir coke

main vi ohi kha ke likhagi ​

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thankju ji.....
main tah chah piti hoye c...
te nall khanda c peya pakode...
te chah nikle fiki..es dukh karke mere toh es sab likh hoyaa... ..


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•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤° said:

jas waangu peeke likhi gayi

u hasing o
hasna mana ae



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•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤° said:

jas waangu peeke likhi gayi​

u hasing o
hasna mana ae​

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tuhanu kiddan pta mai ki pita c,talli hoe firde....hmmm
mai te chah piti c.....​