j bachpan

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rashmi sharma

Member

• Aug 19, 2010

• #1

Eh kavita main Tilak JI nu dedicate kardi haan kyonki ohna de kehan te hi mai bachpan de donno roop pesh karan dii koshish kitti hai shayad bhawan vich baih ke kuj jiyada hi lamba ho gya hai. Gustakhi muaf karana ji.


Main kithon mod liawan
Oh bachpan de pal saare
Jad vehde de vich sounde
Te raati gin de taare.
Jad waqat shaam daa hunda
Assi ja kothe te chad de
Kathian krke akhwaran
Ohnu gol roll vich bann de
Phir chounk ch si ohnu sutde
Te luk-2 ohnu takde
Koi kheton aundi swani* *aurat
Ohnu aakh vcha ke chuk di
Mallak jehe phir usnu
Sir tokkre* de vich dhardi *sir te rarkhya tokkra

Kuj agge kadam vdhaundi
Phir edher udher si takkdi
Us chukke hoey gathde nu
Oh tokkre vichon kad di
Oh jiun-2 us nu khole
Kagaj te kagaj nikklan
Assi jor-2 di hassde
Oh sannu gaalan kad di
Oh phir agahan* nu vadhdi *aagge*
Assi ohio kagaj chukk de
Te phir mashakat karde
Jad miinh* da paani khad da *varish

Kagaj di kishti bnounde
Farji insaan bathounde
phir usnu disha dikhaunde
kade band gate* de hethon *school da gate
tidh bhaar aander lang jande
rukhan diyan khodan* vichon *khuddan
totee de bachche kad liaunde
potte* vich daane dikhde *pait
assi aakhan vich muskaunde
phir badi hifajat de naa
ohnu othe hi rakh aunde
ajj kithe gaye oh din ne ?
ajj bachpan oho jiha naa
naa maasi ,chachi, bhooa
hun kathian ho ke baithan
har rishta aunti vich samaya
milbartan oho jiha naa
naa koii kise ghar jaanda
naa koii kise daa khanda
har ikk rasoi nu hun
hai barger pizza mehkanda
mere punjab de ballade* *baalak

naa gabharu uchche lambe
naa khedan khido khundi**
naa khedan peel palange**
naa khedan kali pili deeti**
naa khedan lookan mitti**
naa khedan itt spittan**
naa khedan dhupp te chawan**



**punjab vichkhedian jaan wallian kuj khedan

eh khedan udd pudd gayian
jiun din chade pichon parchawan
har vele computer te bahinde
waqat gavounde saara
ja oh rehan mobile nu chimbde
ja har dam chadya paara
naa oh ghar ton bahar nikklan
na ghar waale nikklan dende
hun bharosa tutt giya hai
band darwajean piche rehnde
naa koi dhee bhain hun saanji
na koi kise di raakhi
aapna hi aapne nu khaawe
bass mauka ikk thiawe
"rashmi"kithon mod liawan
oh bachpan de pal saare…..

 

MAVERICK

Member

• Aug 19, 2010

• #2

if u seriously write them on ur own...then kudos to u...do kavitavan parhiyan..doven kaim c...thanks for sharing rashmi..

 

*Sippu*

*FrOzEn TeARs*

• Aug 19, 2010

• #3

Main kithon mod liawan
Oh bachpan de pal saare
Jad vehde de vich sounde
Te raati gin de taare.
Jad waqat shaam daa hunda
tfs miss ghar

 

Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• Aug 19, 2010

• #4

Bachpan

 

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rashmi sharma

Member

• Aug 20, 2010

• #5

THE GODFATHER said:

if u seriously write them on ur own...then kudos to u...do kavitavan parhiyan..doven kaim c...thanks for sharing rashmi..

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thankyou ji. eh meri hi likhi rachna hai. jis nu likhan lai " ammdi da vehda"(shayri.com te) padan to baad tilak ji ne prerit kita.tuhanu meri eh rachna pasand aai,is lai shukar gujar haan ji

 

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rashmi sharma

Member

• Aug 20, 2010

• #6

jaswindersinghbaidwan said:

Bachpan

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shukria ji

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Aug 23, 2010

• #7

lagda tusi apna bachpan bahut miss karde ho
wadia pesh kita bachpan diya sharata nu,anbholpune nu

 

dc16

- dEsPeraTe cRaNky -

• Aug 23, 2010

• #8

bahut hi sohna likhya