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Niki_Grewal said:

perh hi lai...waise lambi si...bahot sohni hai PP....te manno chahe na.....hoya taan hai kuchh....waise main manana vi nahi....te je kuchh kahoge taan manna vi nahi

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~J@TT~ said:

yarr tusi Lok inna sauna kiddan likh linde ho...??

poori ik-2 gal explain kitti payi hai.
rhythm vi porra aa..te gal vi poori aa...
kamal aa!!!

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Niki_Grewal said:

perh hi lai...waise lambi si...bahot sohni hai PP....te manno chahe na.....hoya taan hai kuchh....waise main manana vi nahi....te je kuchh kahoge taan manna vi nahi

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Pardesan Punjaban said:

u know i was expecting that from u
vaase i know avve aa
try kiti si bas kee pyar ch ida da hee kujh hunda hona

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SHauKeeN GaBRu said:

main te first poem ton baad hi sense kar leya c...

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Pardesan Punjaban said:

par koie meri feeling nahi aa​

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minu tah es line te hasa jada aya.....

jas_sandhu said:

bhuut sohni aa ji.....badiyan vadya line likhiyan...chah piti c ke gall likhan lage mere vangran....

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minu tah es line te hasa jada aya.....

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milk peeta choco te coffee paa ke
is laie poem da vi ghala malla ho gia
main kiha pahela das devasaaria ne majak udaouna kiha si main

sherdil said:

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Pardesan Punjaban said:

milk peeta choco te coffee paa ke
is laie poem da vi ghala malla ho gia
main kiha pahela das devasaaria ne majak udaouna kiha si main

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jas_sandhu said:

na majaak kahnu.. tuhade naal tah hamdardi honi sariyan nu poem pad ke........

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hamdardi kis gal dee

Pardesan Punjaban said:

hamdardi kis gal dee

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jdo ehojiyan poems mann vich banan lag jan....fir samjo kamm kharab je...... ...

jas_sandhu said:

jdo ehojiyan poems mann vich banan lag jan....fir samjo kamm kharab je...... ...

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