gustakhi meri

yasbirsidhu5

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• Jul 7, 2012

• #1

Lattan kambdiya dil darda na mainu draya kr yaara
Mere bol kise hor nu bol k na sadia kr yaara

Mzak eda d ni seh sakdi atma dukhi meri
Dar gya c bas ahi gustakhi meri.......

 

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• Jul 7, 2012

• #2

thxxxxx good

 

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$hokeen J@tt

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• Jul 8, 2012

• #3

nice one

Please go through Punjabi Poetry Rules at once

https://www.unp.me/f30/rules-poetry-section-106023/

Please mention Writer's name at the end of the poem

 

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• Jul 8, 2012

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yasbirsidhu5

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• Jul 8, 2012

• #5

ok ji agge to likh deage j kde likhan de mood ch hoye...

 

Und3rgr0und J4tt1

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• Jul 8, 2012

• #6

nice.......