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Birha Tu Sultan

Kitu

• Aug 31, 2011

• #1

 

ranapardeep87

Member

• Aug 31, 2011

• #2

Overall nice poem.. but could you please explain me last two lines "Aj vi Birha poojda hai ohnu jinne todeya dil ohda ja jinna ditte gam beshumaar"

 

Birha Tu Sultan

Kitu

• Aug 31, 2011

• #3

veer ji birha mera name aa te es lines vich dass keh riha hai ke
oh hamesha khus rehna jihna ne mere dil todeya te jihna ne mainu gam dittee

 

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binder77

Elite

• Sep 1, 2011

• #4

very nice

 

ranapardeep87

Member

• Sep 1, 2011

• #5

Hmmm. Bhut Chnga veer... Try to publish sum of them

 

Birha Tu Sultan

Kitu

• Sep 1, 2011

• #6

sukriya veeer g ha ji koshish karange publish krn di

 

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Prime VIP

• Sep 2, 2011

• #7

Superb ji

 

Birha Tu Sultan

Kitu

• Sep 2, 2011

• #8

sukriya veer g