Bhuli Na Tu Sanu Vairne

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 30, 2007

• #1

Bhuli na tu sanu vairne
Bhave bhul javi jag sara
Hasdi taan bada fabdi
Tera rusna hi lagda mara

Gali ch gere marda fira
Ni teri ik takni nu lochaan
Tu taan aadhi need lah layi
Suke yaar bethe vich sochan
Badla ch chann chhupiya
Hun tahkda koi-koi tara
Hasdi taan bada fabdi
Tera rusna hi lagda mara

Unjh taan tu nahi mildi
Tere dharshan supne vich karda
Jind meri doldi jive
Suka patta pani te tarda
Tere bin nahi sarna
Hun RAVI nu bana le larra
Hasdi taan bada fabdi
Tera rusna hi lagda marra

 

Johal

ChArDi KaLaN

• Jul 31, 2007

• #2

wow

bhtu wadiyaa 22 ggg

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 31, 2007

• #3

[johal]
wow

bhtu wadiyaa 22 ggg

THANKS 22 JI
BAHUT-BAHUT DHANBAD

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Jul 31, 2007

• #4

nice one.........

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 31, 2007

• #5

[Pardesan Punjaban;]

nice one........


THANKS 4 MY LAST POEM

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Jul 31, 2007

• #6

last poem kion:O

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 31, 2007

• #7

KYUNKI TUHADI LIKHI"MERI FIRST POEM" PARR KE LAGDA
YAAR POEM TA EH HAI
AASI BEVAJAH SHAYARI VICH ULJHI JANDE HAAN

MERI IS ULJHI HOYI JINDAGI NU
KADE HOR ULJHAUON NU JEE KARDA
KISE SOHNE JIHE GABRU NU
JI KAH BULAUN NU JI KARDA

DIN RAAT IK TARAPH JIHI
SINE VICH KIYUN RAHNDI HAI
JIS NE LAYI EH TARAPH
KADE USNU NU TARPHAUN NU JI KARDA


AAJ MERA USDE CHHALLE NAAL
APNI MUNDHI BATAUN NU JE KARDA
USDE NAAM DI GANNI MARRA KE
GAL VICH PAUN NU JI KARDA

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Jul 31, 2007

• #8

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
tusi kina sohna likh dita
mere kol te kade vi nahi si likh hona
gud one aa g
and plzzzzzzzzz mera majak nah udaoo

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 31, 2007

• #9

NA JI NA
MAIN TUHADA MAJAK KIVE UDA SAKDA
ENA VADIA TUSI LIKHYA HAI
ASSI TAAN TUHADE JUNIOR HAAN
BAS MEHARA RAKHIO

MAIN SHAYAD LIKH TAAN TAAN SAKDA
BUT MERE KOL KOI OBJECTIVE NAHI HUNDA
JADO KISE TAAN LIKHYA VEKHDA HAAN TAAN
LAGDA YAAR ES TE LIKHANA CHAHIDA SI

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Jul 31, 2007

• #10

fer theek aa
4 poem hor likhia si
shed 5

meri oper vaali kala thale aa gayie si
so likhna chad dita
bhave par ke dekh lioo

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 31, 2007

• #11

ES TARAH KARNA SI
KI KOTHE CHARR KE LIKHNA SI
YAAN FER BASEMENT VICH BAH KE LIKHYA KARO
MAIN AAP BAHUT SARE SHAYER BATHROOM VICH BAH KE LIKHE NE
OTHE CONCENTRATION JAYADA LAGDI HAI NA

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Jul 31, 2007

• #12

main te sirf majak ch likhe si
serious ho ke nai
mostly poem 5 min dia aa
bas chaa jiha si kee main vi likhana
so lith gia oh chaa hun

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 31, 2007

• #13

MAIN CHAA TE IK POEM LIKHI SI
BAHUT DEPRESSIVE AA

MAINU AAJ BADA HAI CHAA
VE MAIN CHLIYA SIVIA DE RAAH
TERI CHALANI NA KOI VAAH
VE MAIN CHALIYA SIVIA DE RAAH

MAIN RABB KOLO MANGIA
KUJH KHUSHIYA
UHNE KIHA MULL KI TARENGA
CHAL JA DHUKHI HI CHANGA HAI
AVEN SUKHA DA KARJA CHAREGA GA
DUKH LENE TAAN HOR LEJA
DUKHA DA NA KOI BHAA
VE MAIN CHALIYA SIVIA DE RAAH

KADI CHEHRA SUNHARI DHUPP VARGA
HUN KALI MASIYA VARGA HO GAYA HAI
MERA HASSA HUN PURANE GHAR DIYA
NIHA DE VICH KHO GAYA HAI
MERE PURANE YAAR VELI VI BHUL GAYE MERA NAA
VE MAIN CHALIYA SIVIA DE RAAH

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Jul 31, 2007

• #14

wow nice one aa g
bahut sohna likhde ho

 

❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤

Prime VIP

• Aug 1, 2007

• #15

bohat vadiaa ah ji.........tankuuuu

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Aug 1, 2007

• #16

...bahut kaim likheya

 

smilly

VIP

• Aug 1, 2007

• #17

Bhut vadiyaa ravi ....

keep it up.......

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Aug 1, 2007

• #18

THANKS TO KADHOO DE PATOLE DA,
PP DA & MERE VEER JASS DA

 

Konvicted_Jatt

S@RP@NCH

• Aug 5, 2007

• #19

wow bahut vadiya likhia hai ji......

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Aug 6, 2007

• #20

THANKS RABNJIT 22 JI
THANKS FOR UR APPERICIATION