bad-zaat zaat,,be-dard mard

Ronny said:

gud1 Apninder ji i like it,,
kuriye gal tan tu sachi kahi hai mard hamesha hee aurat nu dhokhebaaz kehnde ne par oh hundiya nhi hun ,,, loki dhokhebaaz kehnde sahiba nu par kee koi saki bhen apne aakhan de samne apne veer marde vekh sakdi hai? nhi kade nhi,,,

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Ronny said:

kee pata ohne kee sochiya c eh tan oh hee jandi c,,,,

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ji, bilkul sach,, oh secret te ohde naal hi daffan ho gayee aa

yadwinder_yaad said:

awesome APNI

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reshmi_mutiyar said:

ajj pehli vaar mein ikk geet suniya,,YAARO RANNA CHANCHAL HAARIAN, KI RANNA DA ITTVAAR,,IHHE DINNE DARRAN PARCHAAVION,, RAATEEN NADIYAN KARDIYAN PAAR,,,, jiss geet ch aaurat waste shri hardev dalgir (lekhak dev tharikewala) ne gaalan hi gaalan likhiyan,, geet sohna aa,, per offensive aa,, oss geet nu compliments v samjhiya jaa sakda aa,, par aaurat 365 chalittar nahi aa,,,,,

shri dalgir ji nu jawab aa mera,,,,,,,kafi lamba aa,,, plzzz sara parrio,,,,,,,,,,give your comments plzz,,,,,,,,,,,,


kanu likh likh bhejda mehnia nu, kade geet kade kahaniya ve,
tahne tohmtan dushmana la la ke, paaven pani de wich madhaania ve,
mard anha hai anhi hai gal karda, ihne aaurtan kadon pashania ve,
har tha te aaurat te dosh lagda, kadon keemtan mard ne janian ve,

jekar aaurat ne anbhol hi hass lita, ihda haasa na mard to jhal hoya,
aakh chuk ke dekhiya je kidhre, uddon mard de seene ch shal hoya,
ih c massla koyee aanant wala, jehra kade na kisse to hal hoya,
aaurat badhi hai payee majboorian di, ihhi dekh na mard to khal hoya,

kade puchda oye marda tu haal sada, assin dassde kinna behaal hoy,
tu ta kadh laina-e dil di bhaaf sari, assin andaron andrin halal hoy,
kinne seene de wich shek hoy, sade kolon na kite dikhaal hoy,
kon samajh da-e aaurat de dardan nu, mard sada hi mard de naal hoy,

tarle mintan kar kar lakh waari, pa pa waste kadhein la-hoorian ve,
dagga, dhokhe, faraib diya fandhiya oye, piya parkhda kaalian te boorian ve,
tere apne andar v hai khot marda, tahion lagdian dillan wich doorian ve,
sade hathon hi kha kha choorian tu, piya saanu hi vatda ghoorian ve,

ihho mard da hi dastoor siga, assin tur gaye jithe tu tor dita,
assin kat de aa zindagi chup reh ke, kade v kisse na gal te zor ditta,
dil tera c tenu hi saump ditta, jism hor da c hor layee khor dita,
wichon sakhna jiha wazood sada, bhora bhora kar ke bhor dita,

jihna raahan nu ajj piyan kosda-e, ohna raahan hi tenu pyar ditta,
tu te sanu hi aakhda-365 challitar, assin apaa v taithon vaar dita,
china china kar dil de rah tere, vangaa tuttiyan vaal khilaar ditte,
apninder vand ke pyar te mamta nu, sare jag de karz uttaar ditte,,,,,

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arashsidhu said:

ik meri ve a g
Ik Kadam Puteya Ta Duje Da Fikar Ae,
Zindagi Kuj Es Tara De Vaadian Da Safar Ae,
Parda-Parda So Gaya Si Yaara Tu Jehri Kitab,
Aakri Saffe Ute Shayad Mera Hi Jikar Ae. . . .

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reshmi_mutiyar said:

ji, bilkul sach,, oh secret te ohde naal hi daffan ho gayee aa

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Ronny said:

par ik sahiba de karke sari aurat jaat nu badnaam nhi keha ja sakda,,

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Niki_Grewal said:

Awesome poem....way to go girl....u r talented.

baaki jehre izzat na keran jaande hon....ohna di izzat keri di v nahi hundi.....aapan kehra kise ton ghat aansmirk :D



seems like i m missing quite a bit ova 'ere by being inactive..lol...

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Angel_Eyes said:

Apwinder its soo good that i dont have nuff words to appreciate.
Bahut hi sachiya kahiya tusi, te aurat eda hi shayad bichari ape hi andar andar sardi kurdi rehndi hai, kade dhee banke te kade wife banke . U are really good at writing, keep up the good work.

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thnx angel ji,,, i kep trying,, i m really very happy,, ki tusi dono,,garewal ji and yourself,,,are grr8,,, love u both very much

kudi_patole_wargi said:

didi ji,, sift na karia karo,, apni choti bhen nu ghut ke hug karia karo bass,,, isse di piyasi aa mein

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