Adhuri Manzil

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yaaden_kamal

Member

• Jun 18, 2008

• #1

adhuri Manzil
oh Mere 'cho Khushian Bhaaldi,

main Us 'cho Khushian Tolhda,

assin Dono Khushian Di Bhaal 'ch

kaafi Door Nikal Jaande

par Afsos !

na Usdi Talash Mukdi

te

na Hi Main Kise Banne Laggda.​

 

Lily

B.R

Staff member

• Jun 18, 2008

• #2

nice share...

 

Royal_Punjaban

»»K@mli!««

• Jun 18, 2008

• #3

thku 4 shairing............

 

V

V € € R

~Badmassha Vich Shareef~

• Jun 19, 2008

• #4

v nice...............

 

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yaaden_kamal

Member

• Jun 19, 2008

• #5

Thanks u all for reading my poems.

Jagpal

 

HoneY

MaaPeya Da LaaDLa

• Jun 19, 2008

• #6

nice one

 

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yaaden_kamal

Member

• Jun 24, 2008

• #7

Marjanean Tera Taan Naam Hi Mainu Bahut Wadhiya Laggea.

Thanks Tuhada Ke Tusi Meri Poem Nu Pasand Keeta.

 

er_rose

"Puttar mitharey mevey"

• Jun 25, 2008

• #8

"..... vadiya likhiya aaa tusi g....."

 

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yaaden_kamal

Member

• Jul 17, 2008

• #9

Thanks G meri poem nu read karan layi.

 

smilly

VIP

• Jul 18, 2008

• #10

Nice one dear............

 

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yaaden_kamal

Member

• Jul 18, 2008

• #11

Thanks G

 

MAHIWAAL

H B K

• Jul 19, 2008

• #12

very nice,............

 

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yaaden_kamal

Member

• Jul 21, 2008

• #13

Thanks Mahiwal ji
Jagpal

 

close ur eyes and make a wish

Elite

• Jul 21, 2008

• #14

niceeeeeeeeee

 

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yaaden_kamal

Member

• Jul 21, 2008

• #15

THanks G.

 

jaggi633725

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• Feb 12, 2009

• #16

nice.