Aakh Mastani

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 14, 2007

• #1

Lo unpians, sads shayiri taan bahut ho gayi.Thora jiha shugal kar layie.Vaise is vich hath tang hi hai.

Lak patala te lehnga bhari,
Kardi jave maro-mari,
Naine tere ne bare shikari
sidhe laun nishane
Ni tu labhadi phirdi a
Gabru patan de bahane.Ni tu.............

Mukh tere te noor hai chariya
Ishq da tenu sarur hai chariya
Oh dur vekh tera yaar hai khariya
Jena laye tu kal yarane
Ni tu labhadi phirdi hai,Ni gabru patane de bahane

Saal solvan hove akh mastani
Rakhani pendi phir nigrani
Ghar tere je koi maar gaya bhani
Phir duniya maru taane
Ni tu labhdi phirdi hai gabru patane de bahane

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 15, 2007

• #2

Main 22 saria nu keha si eh post bahut cheap aa
Par koi nahi kade kade mungi masara vi khani chahidi hai.b

 

roopishwar kaur

Well-known member

• Jul 15, 2007

• #3

vadiya likhi aa
nice one
gud effort

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 16, 2007

• #4

vadiya likhi aa
nice one
gud effort roop punjaban
rain de ni rain de ni rahan de
chuthia taslia na de
Sade fukare shayara nu marra
rahan de
chuthia taslia na de

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 16, 2007

• #5

22 aah sache dost di nishani hundi hai.
thanks 4 encouraging me ROOPISHWAR JI

 

jaggi633725

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• Feb 16, 2009

• #6

nice.