DEKH RAHI AA , KI SARE BANDE HI ITHE, JIHNA NE RESPOND KITA, SAB NE BALLE BALLE HI KITI, >>> kon samajh da-e aurat de dardan nu, mard sada hi mard de naal hoy,
YOU'VE PORTRAYED THE CHARACTER OF WOMEN VERY NICELY--
GOOD WORK
kahnu likh likh bhejda mehnia nu, kade geet kade kahaniya ve,
tahne tohmtan dushmna la la ke, paaven pani de wich madhania ve,
mard anha hai anhi hai gal karda, ihne aurtan kadon pashania ve,
har tha te aurat te dosh lagda, kadon keemtan mard ne janian ve,
jekar aaurat ne anbhol hi hass lita, ihda hassa na mard to jhal hoya,
akh chuk ke vekhiya je kidhre, uddon mard de seene ch shal hoya,
ih c massla koyee aanant wala, jehra kade na kisse to hal hoya,
aurat badhi hai payee majboorian di, ihi dekh na mard to khal hoya,
kade puchda oye marda tu haal sada, assin dassde kinna behaal hoy,
tu ta kadh laina-e dil di bhaaf sari, assin andaron andrin halal hoy,
kinne seene de wich shek hoy, sade kolon na kite dikhaal hoy,
kon samajh da-e aurat de dardan nu, mard sada hi mard de naal hoy,
tarle mintan kar kar lakh waari, pa pa waste kadhein la-hoorian ve,
dagga, dhokhe, faraib diya fandhiya oye, piya parkhda kaalian te boorian ve, ((indian, pakistani, gorian, kaalian))
tere apne andar v hai khot marda, tahion pendian dillan wich doorian ve,
sade hathon hi kha kha choorian tu, piya sanu hi vatda ghoorian ve,
ihho mard da hi dastoor siga, assin tur gaye jithe tu tor dita,
assin kat de aa zindagi chup reh ke, kade v kisse na gal te zor ditta,
dil tera c tenu hi saump ditta, jism hor da c hor layee khor dita,
wichon sakhna jiha wazood sada, bhora bhora kar ke assin bhor dita,
jihna raahan nu ajj piyan kosda-e, ohna raahan hi tenu pyar ditta,
tu te sanu hi aakhda-365 challitar, assin apaa v taithon vaar dita,
china china kar dil de rah tere, vangaa tuttiyan vaal khilaar ditte,
aurat vand ke pyar te mamta nu, sare jag de karz uttaar ditte,,,,,
...khasa xpirience lagda 
