waheguru taufeeq baksh de...

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sultanpuriya

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• Jan 19, 2012

• #1

ੇTeri Rja naal " Raat Din " chlde ne ..
Malka Chulle, Chirag te Sive balde ne..
Malka Mai galt si, galt aa, kuch THEEK baksh de..
Apni Rja wich rehn di " TaufeeQ" baksh de..

 

Mandeep_Kalsi

Mandeep Kalsi

• Jan 19, 2012

• #2

good one

 

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sultanpuriya

Member

• Jan 19, 2012

• #3

dhanvaad veer g par aap ni likheya ..vadiya lageya so copy kar leya ...

 

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$hokeen J@tt

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• Jan 19, 2012

• #4

plz go through poetry rules

https://www.unp.me/f30/rules-poetry-section-106023/

thread moved to 2 liner poetry

 

Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• Jan 19, 2012

• #5

nice

 

Black Cat

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• Jan 19, 2012

• #6

too gud g....

 

*Sippu*

*FrOzEn TeARs*

• Jan 19, 2012

• #7

ehi kam aukha lol tfs nice one

 

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sultanpuriya

Member

• Jan 19, 2012

• #8

dhanvaad ji....

 

Faizullapuria-Rai

Rai

• Feb 1, 2012

• #9