Sukha Di Tan Gal Shad

Gill 22

Elite

• Jun 29, 2012

• #1

Das Rabba Lekh Mere Ki Kehnde Ne,
Sukha Di Tan Gal Shad,
Dukh Das Kinne Ku Rehnde Ne......Gill


ਦੱਸ ਰੱਬਾ , ਲੇਖ ਮੇਰੇ ਕੀ ਕਹਿੰਦੇ ਨੇ........

ਸੁੱਖਾਂ ਦੀ ਤਾਂ ਗੱਲ ਛੱਡ.........

ਦੁੱਖ ਕਿੰਨੇ ਕੁ ਰਹਿੰਦੇ ਨੇ.......

 

VIP_FAKEER

VIP

• Jun 29, 2012

• #2

awesome ji..
mods!! i think it can pass for 2 liner poetry section..
Gill 22.. do tin lines wali poetry ..2 liner section wich post kariya karo

 

Gill 22

Elite

• Jun 29, 2012

• #3

veer eh 3lines wali c mai iss karke ni kitti

 

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$hokeen J@tt

Prime VIP

• Jun 29, 2012

• #4

Moved to 2 liner section

nice gill ji

but eh ik stanza v nai lag reha poori tarah... ta karke me shift kar reha thread to 2 liner section

 

JUGGY D

BACK TO BASIC

• Jun 29, 2012

• #5

oyee terii ...........dil te laggi aa yaar

 

riskyjatt

Risky Jatt

• Jun 30, 2012

• #6

nice....................

 

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Z

• Jul 2, 2012

• #7