mere hakk vich

Manjeetmsn

Elite

• Sep 17, 2014

• #1

tu mile na mile a kismt de hatth vich
pr teri yad tan sajjna poora mere hakk vich

 

ลgǝи†.47

Codename 47

• Sep 18, 2014

• #2

je tusi ap likheya ta u got skills. you dont have to be rythemic with 2 lines shayari..just my 5 cents

 

Manjeetmsn

Elite

• Sep 18, 2014

• #3

22 english ch hatth tait a kirpa karke punjabi samjhayo bakki veer likhda main kudd van
jehde shbd mere nyi hunde onna thlle writer name hunda a
ki tusi a tan ni kai rai k lines di lai nyi bni

 

ลgǝи†.47

Codename 47

• Sep 18, 2014

• #4

bahut wadia likheya veere
mai keha tusi hor jor dena thoda shabda ch wajan leyao means vocabulary ghaint use karo