She

J@tti

..Majajan..
She:

Formed by God’s own hands,
With teeny tiny little toes
You came with a smile so bright
Filled my world with delight

Untouched by the world
With a soul so pure
Precious gift from above
You are an embodiment of His love

Forgive all for calling you a mistake,
When your grandmom winces,
And your aunts talk mean
Know that you are a piece of my heart

Though they don’t hold you now
In time they will realize their folly
Our home is quiet, but
The heavens are singing

For an angel has just arrived
 

J@tti

..Majajan..
Its either nice or it is not.... regardless of who wrote it.


To answer your Q: I wrote it.. does not really rhyme or flow.. but its something.
 

Dhillon

Dhillon Sa'aB™
Staff member
nice one , thanks for sharing,
1-2 lines rhyme kardiya, you have made some progress :p
 

prithvi.k

on off on off......
yeah its little bit not in proper rhyme/flow but much better then those others copy paste..
Written by own lines,,therefore nice.
 
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