yaadon ka silsila

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singh jassi

Member

• Jul 2, 2012

• #1

kuch dard sanjoye rakhe the is dil me
aaj phir zindagi se takra ge
jis mor pe sab khatam kiya tha
usi mor pe yaadon ka silsila shuru kar bethe...

-jassi

 

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3275_gill

Z

• Jul 2, 2012

• #2

 

ankur prashar

Member

• Jul 3, 2012

• #3

jassi g last line ko thoda modify kardo,
jis mor pe sab khatam kiya tha,
yaadon ka silsila shuru kar usi mor par aa ge.

thoda rythmic ho jaye gya.

 

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bhandohal

Well-known member

• Jul 25, 2012

• #4

very nyc